[ippm] AD review for draft-ietf-ippm-rt-loss-02

Wesley Eddy <wes@mti-systems.com> Mon, 27 February 2012 18:15 UTC

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Subject: [ippm] AD review for draft-ietf-ippm-rt-loss-02
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Hi, I've done an AD review of the rt-loss document and think
it's ready to go to IETF LC and IESG Review, except for one
question that I have on what may be simply a typo:

In Section 5, the last paragraph prior to 5.1 says:

   In the metric name, the variable <Stream> SHALL be replaced with the
   process used to define the sample, using one of the above processes
   (or other process, the details of which MUST be specified if used).

I believe, "<Stream>" should be "<Sample>"?  For instance,
section 5.1 is Name: Type-P-Round-trip-Loss-<Sample>-Stream and
section 6.1 is Type-P-Round-trip-Loss-<Sample>-Ratio.

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Wes Eddy
MTI Systems

[ippm] AD review for draft-ietf-ippm-rt-loss-02 Wesley Eddy
Re: [ippm] AD review for draft-ietf-ippm-rt-loss-… Al Morton