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Re: [IPsec] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-08.txt

Valery Smyslov <smyslov.ietf@gmail.com> Wed, 31 March 2021 13:27 UTC

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From: Valery Smyslov <smyslov.ietf@gmail.com>
To: 'Christian Hopps' <chopps@chopps.org>, 'IPsecME WG' <ipsec@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [IPsec] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-08.txt
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Hi Chris,

> This version incorporates Valery's WGLC editorial suggestions with some minor tweaks.

I reviewed the diff and I think that my concerns are resolved. Thank you for addressing them.

Regards,
Valery.

> Thanks,
> Chris.
> 
> > On Mar 30, 2021, at 8:11 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> >
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the IP Security Maintenance and Extensions WG of the IETF.
> >
> >        Title           : IP-TFS: Aggregation and Fragmentation Mode for ESP and its Use for IP Traffic Flow Security
> >        Author          : Christian Hopps
> > 	Filename        : draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-08.txt
> > 	Pages           : 30
> > 	Date            : 2021-03-30
> >
> > Abstract:
> >   This document describes a mechanism for aggregation and fragmentation
> >   of IP packets when they are being encapsulated in ESP payload.  This
> >   new payload type can be used for various purposes such as decreasing
> >   encapsulation overhead for small IP packets; however, the focus in
> >   this document is to enhance IPsec traffic flow security (IP-TFS) by
> >   adding Traffic Flow Confidentiality (TFC) to encrypted IP
> >   encapsulated traffic.  TFC is provided by obscuring the size and
> >   frequency of IP traffic using a fixed-sized, constant-send-rate IPsec
> >   tunnel.  The solution allows for congestion control as well as non-
> >   constant send-rate usage.
> >
> >
> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs/
> >
> > There are also htmlized versions available at:
> > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-08
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-08
> >
> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-08
> >
> >
> > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
> > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
> >
> > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
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> >
> >
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