Re: [IPsec] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipsecme-chacha20-poly1305-09.txt

Yoav Nir <ynir.ietf@gmail.com> Sun, 14 June 2015 18:11 UTC

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Done.

> On Jun 14, 2015, at 8:57 PM, Yaron Sheffer <yaronf.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Sure.
> 
> On 06/14/2015 02:11 PM, Yoav Nir wrote:
>> How about:
>> 
>> OLD:
>>    The Pad Length field need not exceed 4 octets. However, RFC 4303 and this specification do not
>>    prohibit using greater pad lengths.
>> 
>> NEW:
>>    The length of the Padding field need not exceed 4 octets. However, neither RFC 4303 nor this
>>    specification require using the minimal padding length.
>> 
>> Yoav
>> 
>>> On Jun 14, 2015, at 10:37 AM, Yaron Sheffer <yaronf.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Quick nit: the sentence "The Pad Length field need not exceed 4 octets" is a bit confusing, because the Pad Length field is obviously a constant 2 octets. I would suggest "The Padding field's length (and the value of the Pad Length field) need not exceed 4 octets."
>>> 
>>> Thanks,
>>> 	Yaron
>>> 
>>> On 06/14/2015 09:46 AM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>>>>  This draft is a work item of the IP Security Maintenance and Extensions Working Group of the IETF.
>>>> 
>>>>         Title           : ChaCha20, Poly1305 and their use in IKE & IPsec
>>>>         Author          : Yoav Nir
>>>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-ipsecme-chacha20-poly1305-09.txt
>>>> 	Pages           : 12
>>>> 	Date            : 2015-06-13
>>>> 
>>>> Abstract:
>>>>    This document describes the use of the ChaCha20 stream cipher along
>>>>    with the Poly1305 authenticator, combined into an AEAD algorithm for
>>>>    the Internet Key Exchange protocol (IKEv2) and for IPsec.
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipsecme-chacha20-poly1305/
>>>> 
>>>> There's also a htmlized version available at:
>>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipsecme-chacha20-poly1305-09
>>>> 
>>>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ipsecme-chacha20-poly1305-09
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
>>>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>>> 
>>>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
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