Re: [IPsec] Comments to the draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-fragmentation-05

Yaron Sheffer <yaronf.ietf@gmail.com> Mon, 03 March 2014 20:49 UTC

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...And s/reassempling/reassembling (also in the preceding paragraph).

	Yaron

On 03/03/2014 06:25 PM, Tero Kivinen wrote:
> I have read this document, and I think it is getting ready. I have
> some nits for it, but they are just typos and similar.
>
> Nits:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> In appendix A:
>
>     The attacker could infrequently emit forged but looking valid fragments
>         		      		   	       	   ^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> s/looking valid/valid looking/
>
> --
>
>     ... that allows receiver to determine forgeg fragments and
>         	    	   	       		 ^^^^^^
>     not to fetch them into the reassempling queue.
>         	  ^^^^^
>
> s/forgeg/forged/
> s/fetch/store/
>

[IPsec] Comments to the draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-… Tero Kivinen
Re: [IPsec] Comments to the draft-ietf-ipsecme-ik… Yaron Sheffer
Re: [IPsec] Comments to the draft-ietf-ipsecme-ik… Valery Smyslov
Re: [IPsec] Comments to thedraft-ietf-ipsecme-ike… Valery Smyslov