[IPsec] Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc4307bis-17

Pete Resnick <presnick@qti.qualcomm.com> Wed, 15 March 2017 14:37 UTC

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Date: Wed, 15 Mar 2017 07:37:53 -0700
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Subject: [IPsec] Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc4307bis-17

Reviewer: Pete Resnick
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc4307bis-17
Reviewer: Pete Resnick
Review Date: 2017-03-15
IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-31
IESG Telechat date: 2017-03-16

Summary:

Ready

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

None

Nits/editorial comments: 

While using MUST, SHOULD, and MAY as nouns and adjectives causes me a
twitch, this document is just fine. There's a typo in the first
paragraph of 1.2.

[IPsec] Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc4307bis-17 Pete Resnick
Re: [IPsec] Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc4307b… Jari Arkko