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Re: [IPsec] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-intermediate-09: (with COMMENT)

Valery Smyslov <svan@elvis.ru> Wed, 02 March 2022 06:13 UTC

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From: Valery Smyslov <svan@elvis.ru>
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Subject: Re: [IPsec] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-intermediate-09: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Murray,

thank you for your comments.

> Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-intermediate-09: No Objection
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> In Section 5, it's peculiar to use normative keywords ("RECOMMENDED", in this
> case) against future documents.  I suggest lower-casing that word.

I agree. Changed to lowercase.

> In Section 6, the full name of the second registry being updated is "IKEv2
> Notify Message Types - Status Types".

Fixed.

Thank you!

Regards,
Valery.

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