[IPsec] Fw: I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-fragmentation-08.txt

"Valery Smyslov" <svanru@gmail.com> Fri, 23 May 2014 14:16 UTC

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Hi all,

I've posted a new version of the document.
It addresses comments, that were articulated
during IESG evaluation.

In particular: more clarifications are added,
RFC2119 keywords are used more carefully,
guidelines are made more clear,
more words are added to Introduction and
PMTU discovery sections,
the overall language is improved (at least I hope).

Regards,
Valery Smyslov.




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>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the IP Security Maintenance and Extensions 
> Working Group of the IETF.
>
>        Title           : IKEv2 Fragmentation
>        Author          : Valery Smyslov
> Filename        : draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-fragmentation-08.txt
> Pages           : 25
> Date            : 2014-05-23
>
> Abstract:
>   This document describes the way to avoid IP fragmentation of large
>   IKEv2 messages.  This allows IKEv2 messages to traverse network
>   devices that do not allow IP fragments to pass through.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-fragmentation/
>
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
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