[IPsec] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6311 (3615)

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Subject: [IPsec] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6311 (3615)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6311,
"Protocol Support for High Availability of IKEv2/IPsec".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=6311&eid=3615

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Yoav Nir <ynir@checkpoint.com>

Section: 6.4

Original Text
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                        Note that this solution requires that either all Child SAs
   use Extended Sequence Numbers (ESNs) or else that no Child SA uses
   ESNs.

Corrected Text
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                        Note that this solution requires that either all Child SAs
   use Extended Sequence Numbers (ESN) or else that no Child SA uses
   ESN.

Notes
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"ESN" is used here as a name of a feature. There is no need to pluralize it. This is different from "SAs" or "SPIs", where there are many of each.

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RFC6311 (draft-ietf-ipsecme-ipsecha-protocol-06)
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Title               : Protocol Support for High Availability of IKEv2/IPsec
Publication Date    : July 2011
Author(s)           : R. Singh, Ed., G. Kalyani, Y. Nir, Y. Sheffer, D. Zhang
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : IP Security Maintenance and Extensions
Area                : Security
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG