Re: [IPsec] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-ipsecme-roadmap-03

[Greg Daley <[e-mail]>]

Hi Yaron,

My reading of the document didn't have time to delve into specific issues regarding
the individual sources, except in a few areas where my interest lies.

Therefore my reading was focussed on the clarity of structure and text, and the completeness
of specifications described.

S7.1
(really just an editing issue)

s/provides losslesss compression/provides lossless compression/

S8.2

Is it worth mentioning that OSPF protection in RFC4552 works with manual keying
only, and that no key exchange protocols are specified?

Most of the earlier document paragraphs describe the affinity of a protocol to IKE/IKEv2 etc.

Please note that I have already used this document myself as a reference (as someone
becoming more familiar with current protocol development for IPSec/IKEv2) so I think
that the document is useful and a good starting point for implementors/protocol developers.

Sincerely, 

Greg Daley

> From: [e-mail]
> To: [e-mail]
> Date: Tue, 11 Aug 2009 00:05:07 +0300
> Subject: [IPsec] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-ipsecme-roadmap-03
> 
> This is the beginning of a two-week WG Last Call, which will end August 24.
> The target status for this document is Informational (to obsolete RFC 2411).
> The current document is at
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipsecme-roadmap-03.
> 
> If you have not read the document before now, please do so. Having fresh
> eyes on the document often brings up important issues. This document is very
> much a survey, so please also review it for completeness: are there
> documents that should be mentioned but aren't. Send any comments to the
> list, even if they are as simple as "I read it and it seems fine".
> 
> Please clearly indicate the position of any issue in the Internet Draft, and
> if possible provide alternative text. Indicate the nature or severity of the
> error or correction, e.g. major technical, minor technical, nit, so that we
> can quickly judge the extent of problems with the document.
> 
> Thanks,
>             Yaron

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