[IPsec] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-intermediate-09: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 02 March 2022 04:48 UTC

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Subject: [IPsec] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-intermediate-09: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-intermediate-09: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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In Section 5, it's peculiar to use normative keywords ("RECOMMENDED", in this
case) against future documents.  I suggest lower-casing that word.

In Section 6, the full name of the second registry being updated is "IKEv2
Notify Message Types - Status Types".

[IPsec] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-… Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker
Re: [IPsec] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on dr… Valery Smyslov