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Comments on <draft-ietf-ipsec-ah-hmac-md5-01.txt> Page 4, 2.1, paragraph 1: "Protection" should be "Prevention" in two places. Page 5, 2.2, paragraph 1, line 4: "zeros" should be "zeros prior to the computation". Page 5, 2.2, paragraph 2, line 4: "SHA" should be "MD5". Norman Shulman Border Network Technologies Inc. Software Engineer Tel 1 416 368 7157 ext 304 norm@border.com Fax 1 416 368 7178
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