Re: [IPsec] WGLC for draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc8229bis

Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Tue, 09 November 2021 14:00 UTC

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Subject: Re: [IPsec] WGLC for draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc8229bis
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I have reviewed the diff at:
  https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=rfc8229&url2=draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc8229bis-01

and the update seems like a good job to me.

I wonder about keeping more of the original authors on the new document,
since it is substantively the same document.  I can not judge what their
contribution was to the original document, nor do I know if they were asked.
If the design team has gone through this consideration, then that's enough
for me.

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