Re: [IPsec] Comments to the draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-fragmentation-05

Hi Tero,

thanks for catching these typos and gramma errors.

Valery.

----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Tero Kivinen" <kivinen@iki.fi>
To: <ipsec@ietf.org>
Sent: Monday, March 03, 2014 8:25 PM
Subject: [IPsec] Comments to the draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-fragmentation-05

>I have read this document, and I think it is getting ready. I have
> some nits for it, but they are just typos and similar.
> 
> Nits:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> 
> In appendix A:
> 
>   The attacker could infrequently emit forged but looking valid fragments
>                          ^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> s/looking valid/valid looking/
> 
> --
> 
>   ... that allows receiver to determine forgeg fragments and
>                     ^^^^^^
>   not to fetch them into the reassempling queue.
>         ^^^^^
> 
> s/forgeg/forged/
> s/fetch/store/
> -- 
> kivinen@iki.fi
> 
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