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From: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>
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Hi,

I have looked at the changes. I think they adress the issues I saw when
reviewing.=20

Thanks

Magnus



On Fri, 2021-04-09 at 06:22 +0000, Zafar Ali (zali) wrote:
> Hi Magnus,
> =20
> Many thanks for your comments and detailed review.
> =20
> We just posted version 10 to address your comments.
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam-10
> =20
> Please see [ZA] in-line on how your comments are addressed.
> =20
> Thanks
> =20
> Regards =E2=80=A6 Zafar
> =20
> From: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>
> Date: Tuesday, March 16, 2021 at 6:42 AM
> To: "last-call@ietf.org" <last-call@ietf.org>
> Cc: "draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam@ietf.org" <
> draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam@ietf.org>, "ot@cisco.com" <ot@cisco.com>,=
 "
> ipv6@ietf.org" <ipv6@ietf.org>, "6man-chairs@ietf.org" <6man-chairs@ietf.=
org>,
> "tsv-art@ietf.org" <tsv-art@ietf.org>
> Subject: RE: Last Call: <draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam-09.txt> (Operati=
ons,
> Administration, and Maintenance (OAM) in Segment Routing Networks with IP=
v6
> Data plane (SRv6)) to Proposed Standard
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> mach.chen@huawei.com>
> Resent-Date: Tue, 16 Mar 2021 03:42:05 -0700
> =20
> This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team=
's
> ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
> primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the documen=
t's
> authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to the
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> =20
> When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this
> review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please always CC
> tsv-art@ietf.org if you reply to or forward this review.
> =20
> =20
> A) Section 2.1:
> =20
> I first missed that "SRH.Flags" is intended as reference to the flags fie=
ld
> in the Segment Router Header. As this notation is prevalent through out t=
he
> document, could you be more explicit about this notation and also maybe b=
e
> clear on what a particular label represents.
> =20
> [ZA] Updated text in the Section 2.1 to make it clear that the draft defi=
nes a
> flag in the Flags field of SRH [RFC8754].
> =20
> B) Section 2.1.1:
> =20
>   When N receives a packet whose IPv6 DA is S and S is a local SID, the
>    line S01 of the pseudo-code associated with the SID S, as defined in
>    section 4.3.1.1 of [RFC8754], is modified as follows for the O-flag
>    processing.
> S01.1. IF SRH.Flags.O-flag is set and local configuration permits
>              O-flag processing THEN
>                 a. Make a copy of the packet.
>                 b. Send the copied packet, along with a timestamp
>                 to the OAM process for telemetry data collection
>                 and export.      ;; Ref1
> =20
> I would note that this  results in the following psudo code as it states
> that it modifies line S01.
> Did you intended an insert so that S01.1 would be between S01 and SO2?
> =20
> [ZA] Yes, the S01.1 is inserted after between S01 and S02. Specific text
> stating the same is added to the Section 2.1.1.
> =20
> This
> Psudeo code just lost its scoping to SRH. I would also note that it doesn=
't
> match the style of what is in RFC 8754. For example a {  } the steps a an=
d b
> should be present. Also with the modification in place you also have a
> spurious } at the end.
> =20
> [ZA] Added the RFC8754 style bracket { }. The added text has its own bloc=
k of
> brackets { }. With the comment that the line S01.1 is inserted after betw=
een
> S01 and S02, the modified pseudo-code is now well contained in its own bl=
ock,
> as follows:=20
> =20
> S01. When an SRH is processed {
> S01.1.   If O-flag is set and local configuration permits O-flag processi=
ng {
>             a. Make a copy of the packet.
>             b. Send the copied packet, along with a timestamp
>                to the OAM process for telemetry data collection
>               and export.      ;; Ref1
>          } /* Matches S01.1 */
> S02.     If Segments Left is equal to zero { =E2=80=A6 }
> =E2=80=A6
> S26. }  /* Matches S01 */
> =20
> S01.1. IF SRH.Flags.O-flag is set and local configuration permits
>              O-flag processing THEN
>                 a. Make a copy of the packet.
>                 b. Send the copied packet, along with a timestamp
>                 to the OAM process for telemetry data collection
>                 and export.      ;; Ref1
>    S02.   If Segments Left is equal to zero {
>    S03.     Proceed to process the next header in the packet,
>             whose type is identified by the Next Header field in
>             the routing header.
>    S04.   }
>    S05.   Else {
>    S06.     If local configuration requires TLV processing {
>    S07.       Perform TLV processing (see TLV Processing)
>    S08.     }
>    S09.     max_last_entry  =3D  ( Hdr Ext Len /  2 ) - 1
>    S10.     If  ((Last Entry > max_last_entry) or
>    S11.          (Segments Left is greater than (Last Entry+1)) {
>    S12.       Send an ICMP Parameter Problem, Code 0, message to
>               the Source Address, pointing to the Segments Left
>               field, and discard the packet.
>    S13.     }
>    S14.     Else {
>    S15.       Decrement Segments Left by 1.
>    S16.       Copy Segment List[Segments Left] from the SRH to the
>               destination address of the IPv6 header.
>    S17.       If the IPv6 Hop Limit is less than or equal to 1 {
>    S18.         Send an ICMP Time Exceeded -- Hop Limit Exceeded in
>                 Transit message to the Source Address and discard
>                 the packet.
>    S19.       }
>    S20.       Else {
>    S21.         Decrement the Hop Limit by 1
>    S22.         Resubmit the packet to the IPv6 module for transmission
>                 to the new destination.
>    S23.       }
>    S24.     }
>    S25.   }
>    S26. }
> =20
> I would also note that if you wanted more generality you could replace a =
and
> b with
> =20
> Execute the configured OAM process. E.g. if using IPFix that would be .
> =20
> C) Section 2.1.1
> =20
>    The processing node SHOULD rate-limit the number of packets punted to
>    the OAM process to avoid hitting any performance impact.
> =20
> So this is protection against misconfiguration or an actual security brea=
ch
> isn't it. Because no entity outside of the domain should be able to set t=
his
> on packets.
> =20
> [ZA] Indeed this is the case. We have updated the security section of the
> draft addressing your comment.
> =20
> So should this limit be configured by the management system or
> baked into the implementation.
> =20
> [ZA] The rate limit should be configured by the management system. Text h=
as
> been added to mandate the configurable rate limiting.
> =20
> And in the later case, isn't the nodes
> capability to handle marked packets dependent on the total load across al=
l
> packets processed at least in one processing pipe?
> =20
> [ZA] An implementation may implement rate limit for O-flag independent of=
 any
> other rate limits applied at the box for any other purposes. The packets =
are
> throttled before they reached the telemetry subsystem (or OAM process).
> Section 2.1.1 text is updated to indicate the rate limit also needed to
> protect the telemetry subsystem.
> =20
> And to me it appears that
> the limit will be dependent on what OAM Process that has been configured =
to
> be executed. Thus, how can this be robustly implemented so that it doesn'=
t
> interfere with the telemetry? Because if there are a mismatch between the=
 O
> flag marking entity and the rate limiting, then the telemetry usefulness
> could be compromised. Can you clarify the thoughts here?
> =20
> [ZA] As these are sampled packets anyway (like in the case of IPFIX), the
> controller is able to work with the subset of the packets reaching it (wh=
en
> the rate limit is effective).
> =20
> D) Section 3.1 and 3.2: I have the impression that quite a lot hides behi=
nd
> the "The echo reply message is IP routed." or corresponding. First of all
> there need to exist a return route for the source of the PING or Trace
> route.
> Secondly, as this is routed without SRV the packet can take a
> different return route, and in case any firewall or other filtering is in
> place the reply may not make it. Is this correctly interpret here? If
> correctly understood I am uncertain if any changes are needed.
> =20
> [ZA] The underlying assumption for ping/ tracing in IP network is that
> responder has IP reachability back to the initiator. The drafts is relyin=
g on
> the IPv6 ping and traceroute capability. Also, [RFC8754] defines the noti=
on of
> an SR domain and use of SRH within the SR domain. [RFC8754] security sect=
ion
> provides security mechanisms to secure the SR domain. The use of ping/
> traceroute defined in this document is restricted to an SR domain. The
> firewall or other filtering are typically performed outside the trusted S=
R
> domain.
> =20
> Cheers
> =20
> Magnus
> =20

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