[Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5952 (3218)

RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> Wed, 09 May 2012 13:13 UTC

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Subject: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5952 (3218)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5952,
"A Recommendation for IPv6 Address Text Representation".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5952&eid=3218

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Rodrigo Curado <rodas@rocketmail.com>

Section: 3.1.4

Original Text
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Network diagrams and blueprints often show what IP addresses are assigned to a system devices.

Corrected Text
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Network diagrams and blueprints often show which IP addresses are assigned to which systems devices.

Notes
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Improved grammar and correction to mismatch between singular and plural usage.

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RFC5952 (draft-ietf-6man-text-addr-representation-07)
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Title               : A Recommendation for IPv6 Address Text Representation
Publication Date    : August 2010
Author(s)           : S. Kawamura, M. Kawashima
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : IPv6 Maintenance
Area                : Internet
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG