RE: FW: New Version Notification for draft-bonica-6man-vpn-dest-opt-09.txt

[Ron Bonica <[e-mail]>]

Melchior,

Thanks for the review. I have just posted a new version with both of your proposed changes.

                                              Ron


From: Melchior Aelmans <[e-mail]>
Sent: Sunday, February 23, 2020 3:29 PM
To: Ron Bonica <[e-mail]>
Cc: 6man WG <[e-mail]>
Subject: Re: FW: New Version Notification for draft-bonica-6man-vpn-dest-opt-09.txt

Hi Ron,

Thanks for this draft which seems to solve customers challenges hence my support for this work.

Some minor comments:

Section:

The original packet can be any layer-2 or layer-3 protocol (e.g.,

   Ethernet, IPv4, IPv6).  The Tunnel IPv6 Header is an IPv6 header

   followed by zero or more extension headers.  The resulting packet is

   a Tunnel IPv6 Packet.
Could be:
The original packet can be any  layer-2 or layer-3 packet (e.g., Ethernet, IPv4, IPv6).
The Tunnel Header is an IPv6 header followed by zero or more extension headers.
The resulting packet is a Tunnel IPv6 Packet.
"The entry-point sends the Tunnel IPv6 Packet to the exit-point and the exit-point executes the following procedure" --> "The entry-point sends the Tunnel IPv6 Packet to the exit-point which then executes the following procedure"

Cheers,
Melchior


On Thu, Feb 20, 2020 at 12:16 AM Ron Bonica <rbonica=[e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
Folks,

Please review.

                      Ron



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A new version of I-D, draft-bonica-6man-vpn-dest-opt-09.txt
has been successfully submitted by Ron Bonica and posted to the IETF repository.

Name:           draft-bonica-6man-vpn-dest-opt
Revision:       09
Title:          The IPv6 Tunnel Payload Forwarding (TPF) Option
Document date:  2020-02-19
Group:          Individual Submission
Pages:          9
URL:            https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-bonica-6man-vpn-dest-opt-09.txt<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/www.ietf.org/id/draft-bonica-6man-vpn-dest-opt-09.txt__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!QQ9REvlQmafezD9iBCV9ymFLMrEMEK8yKX4JiXtcGStlMdcDpGlahIgA8acefNBx$>
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Abstract:
   This document explains how IPv6 options can be used in IPv6 tunnels.
   It also defines the IPv6 Tunnel Payload Forwarding (TPF) option.




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