Re: FW: New Version Notification for draft-bonica-6man-vpn-dest-opt-09.txt

Hi Ron,

Thanks for this draft which seems to solve customers challenges hence my
support for this work.

Some minor comments:

Section:

The original packet can be any layer-2 or layer-3 protocol (e.g.,
   Ethernet, IPv4, IPv6).  The Tunnel IPv6 Header is an IPv6 header
   followed by zero or more extension headers.  The resulting packet is
   a Tunnel IPv6 Packet.

Could be:
The original packet can be any  layer-2 or layer-3 packet (e.g., Ethernet,
IPv4, IPv6).
The Tunnel Header is an IPv6 header followed by zero or more extension
headers.
The resulting packet is a Tunnel IPv6 Packet.

"The entry-point sends the Tunnel IPv6 Packet to the exit-point and the
exit-point executes the following procedure" --> "The entry-point sends the
Tunnel IPv6 Packet to the exit-point which then executes the following
procedure"

Cheers,
Melchior

On Thu, Feb 20, 2020 at 12:16 AM Ron Bonica <rbonica=
40juniper.net@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:

> Folks,
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> Please review.
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>                       Ron
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> Juniper Business Use Only
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> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-bonica-6man-vpn-dest-opt-09.txt
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> A new version of I-D, draft-bonica-6man-vpn-dest-opt-09.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Ron Bonica and posted to the IETF
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> Name:           draft-bonica-6man-vpn-dest-opt
> Revision:       09
> Title:          The IPv6 Tunnel Payload Forwarding (TPF) Option
> Document date:  2020-02-19
> Group:          Individual Submission
> Pages:          9
> URL:
> https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-bonica-6man-vpn-dest-opt-09.txt
> Status:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-bonica-6man-vpn-dest-opt/
> Htmlized:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-bonica-6man-vpn-dest-opt-09
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> Abstract:
>    This document explains how IPv6 options can be used in IPv6 tunnels.
>    It also defines the IPv6 Tunnel Payload Forwarding (TPF) option.
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