Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6man-grand-04
Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com> Mon, 21 June 2021 14:09 UTC
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From: Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 21 Jun 2021 17:09:43 +0300
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6man-grand-04
To: Jen Linkova <furry13@gmail.com>
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Looks good. Thanks for addressing this as well. Regards, Dan On Mon, Jun 21, 2021 at 3:06 PM Jen Linkova <furry13@gmail.com> wrote: > On Mon, Jun 21, 2021 at 8:16 PM Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com> wrote: > > Yes, a paragraph in the Introduction explaining the structure of the > document and especially the place(s) where normative text can be found > would be useful. If you add these you may consider deleting other such > references spread in the text. > > I'll add the following to the very end of the Introduction: > > "This document updates the Neighbor Discovery protocol to avoid packet > loss in the scenario described above. Section 4 discusses the > changes and analyses the potential impact, while normative changes to > [RFC4861] are specified in Section 6. > > -- > SY, Jen Linkova aka Furry >
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