Re: Martin Duke's Discuss on draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam-10: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com> Wed, 02 June 2021 16:47 UTC

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From: Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 02 Jun 2021 09:47:19 -0700
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Subject: Re: Martin Duke's Discuss on draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam-10: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
To: "Zafar Ali (zali)" <zali@cisco.com>
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Thanks, the DISCUSS is gone.

On Wed, Jun 2, 2021 at 9:45 AM Zafar Ali (zali) <zali@cisco.com> wrote:

> Hi Martin,
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> Many thanks for the proposed text; much appreciated!
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> We have posted rev-11 to include your proposed text:
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> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam-11.txt
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam-11
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>  (see also the attached email)
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> Please advise if you have any further comment.
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> Thanks
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> Regards … Zafar
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> *From: *Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>
> *Date: *Tuesday, June 1, 2021 at 12:32 PM
> *To: *"Zafar Ali (zali)" <zali@cisco.com>
> *Cc: *The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam@ietf.org"
> <draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam@ietf.org>, "6man-chairs@ietf.org" <
> 6man-chairs@ietf.org>, "ipv6@ietf.org" <ipv6@ietf.org>, "ot@cisco.com" <
> ot@cisco.com>
> *Subject: *Re: Martin Duke's Discuss on
> draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam-10: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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> That helps a lot, thanks. I might add normative text to your proposed
> change
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> The OAM process is expected to be located on the routing node processing
> the packet.
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>    Although the specification of the OAM process or the external controller
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>    operations are beyond the scope of this document, the OAM process
> SHOULD NOT be
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>    topologically distant from the routing node, as this is likely to
> create significant security
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>    and congestion issues."
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> On Thu, May 27, 2021 at 12:06 PM Zafar Ali (zali) <zali@cisco.com> wrote:
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> Hi Martin,
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> Many thanks for your comments.
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> Please see [ZA] in-line.
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> Thanks
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> Regards … Zafar
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> *From: *Martin Duke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
> *Reply-To: *Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>
> *Date: *Monday, May 24, 2021 at 2:52 PM
> *To: *The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
> *Cc: *"draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam@ietf.org" <
> draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam@ietf.org>, "6man-chairs@ietf.org" <
> 6man-chairs@ietf.org>, "ipv6@ietf.org" <ipv6@ietf.org>, "ot@cisco.com" <
> ot@cisco.com>, "ot@cisco.com" <ot@cisco.com>
> *Subject: *Martin Duke's Discuss on draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam-10:
> (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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> *Resent-Date: *Monday, May 24, 2021 at 2:52 PM
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> Martin Duke has entered the following ballot position for
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> draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam-10: Discuss
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> DISCUSS:
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> I would like to clarify that when the pseudocode says "Send the copied
> packet,
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> along with a timestamp to the OAM process for telemetry data collection and
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> export," that this "process" is colocated on the router, and that this
> process
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> further digests the data so that there is much less than 1 packet going
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> the box per O-bit packet processed.
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> If there is a case where each O-bit packet generates an entire packet
> going off
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> the router to a controller or external OAM process, there are extremely
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> unfortunate corner cases that are not sufficiently mitigated by
> rate-limiting.
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> [ZA] You are right. In fact, this point is explicit mentioned in section
> 3.3, bullet 5 (processing at Node N4) [
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam-10#section-3.3].
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> “As part of processing
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>       the O-flag, it sends a timestamped copy of the packet to a local
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>       OAM process.
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> “
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> The rest of the exporting is based on local policy at the router.
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> To further clarify, we can add additional text in section 2.1.1
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-6man-spring-srv6-oam-10#section-2.1.1,
> as follows:
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> Current Text: Specification of the OAM process or the external controller
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> operations are beyond the scope of this document.
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> Proposed Text:  The OAM process is expected to be located on the routing
> node processing the packet,
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>    however the specification of the OAM process or the external controller
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>    operations are beyond the scope of this document.
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> Would the above diffs address your comment? Please advise
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> COMMENT:
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> Thank you for addressing the TSVART comments (and to Magnus for the review)
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> I see that some of the contributors are in common, but this would appear to
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> have substantial overlap with
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-direct-export/.
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> [ZA] Yes, IPPM DEX options do overlap with this functionality.
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> [ZA] This specification describes how to provide that functionality with a
> single bit in the SR Header.
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