Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6man-ra-pref64-07

Joel Halpern via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sat, 09 November 2019 02:59 UTC

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Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-6man-ra-pref64-07
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2019-11-08
IETF LC End Date: 2019-11-27
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.

Major issues:

Minor issues:
    While IDNits complains about the prefixes begin used for an example, the
    text makes it clear that the example needs to be private IP space, and thus
    seems appropriate as given.

Nits/editorial comments: