Re: [irs-discuss] Use Cases Draft First Cut

Please ignore my last gmail blunder.

On Fri, Sep 21, 2012 at 1:29 PM, Aldrin Isaac <aldrin.isaac@gmail.com> wrote:
> Lucy, could we organize the use cases draft in a manner similar to the
> presentation?  I.e. Use case categories under which would be use case
> requirements and their examples and associated discussion?
>
> On Fri, Sep 21, 2012 at 10:32 AM, Abdussalam Baryun
> <abdussalambaryun@gmail.com> wrote:
>> Hi Russ,
>>
>> The draft is interesting and IMO, I cannot give any feedback if there
>> are references but not shown. I suggest that at least [1-5] references
>> that you see is the most important for the draft to be given on the
>> list.
>>
>> AB
>> ----
>> On 9/19/12, Russ White <russw@riw.us> wrote:
>>> Y'all:
>>>
>>> Last night I published a new draft on use cases for IRS. Please read and
>>> send comments!
>>>
>>> http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-white-irs-use-case/
>>>
>>> Several points to consider:
>>>
>>> 1. I've left all references out at the moment. I suspect this text is
>>> going to be changing a good bit; putting references in at this early of
>>> a stage invites reference mismatches through major text revisions.
>>>
>>> 2. I've left out a couple of suggested use cases. I think we need to
>>> focus on use cases that reach beyond currently available mechanisms, and
>>> show interaction between multiple pieces of an overall system.
>>>
>>> 3. I've worded some summary points in requirements language,
>>> specifically using SHOULD in a couple of places. We need to think about
>>> whether or not these types of references are "proper" in a use cases
>>> draft of this sort.
>>>
>>> 4. The text is probably still rough around the edges --I've focused more
>>> on the justification for the work in the introduction than on the actual
>>> text of the use cases. I'm certain the text in the actual use cases will
>>> harden as we get comments and edit those sections.
>>>
>>> Again, please read and make comments!
>>>
>>> Russ
>>>
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