Re: [Isis-wg] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05: (with COMMENT)

Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org> Tue, 21 April 2015 14:23 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Isis-wg] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05: (with COMMENT)
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> -- Section 5, 2nd paragraph: "The implementation SHOULD also allow
>    operators to control the configuration of 'send' and/or 'verify' the
>    feature of IS-IS PDUs for the links and for the node."
>
> I don't understand the sentence

I think "of 'send' and/or 'verify' the feature" is supposed to be "of
the 'send' and/or 'verify' feature".  The "the" is misplaced.

Barry