[Isis-wg] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-remaining-lifetime-03: (with COMMENT)

["Ben Campbell" <[e-mail]>]

Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-isis-remaining-lifetime-03: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I have just a few minor comments:

- 1, 2nd paragraph: "... the checksum
   field MUST NOT be altered..."

That sounds more like a statement of fact than a normative requirement.

-1, paragraph 4: 

I’m no expert here, but are where the originator might want to let the
LSP expire before it becomes unreachable? (e.g. during a graceful
shutdown?) 

-2, 4th paragraph from end: "An additional
   action is added:
"
This document adds the additional action, or ISO10589 adds it?