Re: [Isis-wg] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-node-admin-tag-10: (with COMMENT)

Pushpasis Sarkar <pushpasis.ietf@gmail.com> Tue, 10 May 2016 03:30 UTC

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From: Pushpasis Sarkar <pushpasis.ietf@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Isis-wg] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-node-admin-tag-10: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Ben,

I have uploaded version-11 addressing all the comments below. Please let 
me know if you have any more comments.

Thanks and Regards,

-Pushpasis


On 5/4/16 4:31 AM, Ben Campbell wrote:
> Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-isis-node-admin-tag-10: No Objection
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> Just a couple of nits:
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> - 4.1, last paragraph: "Each tag SHOULD be treated as an independent
> identifier that MAY be
>     used in policy to perform a policy action."
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> I think the MAY may be spurious. It seems to be a statement of fact about
> the tag, rather than an implementation choice. (But this is a borderline
> case of spuriousness).
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> - 8: In addition to Alvaro and Alissa's comments, remember that RFCs live
> forever. Statements that other work needs to happen will (hopefully)
> become dated. Some qualifier like "At the time of this writing..." can
> help.
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