[Isis-wg] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-auto-conf-04: (with COMMENT)
Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com> Wed, 12 April 2017 18:33 UTC
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Subject: [Isis-wg] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-auto-conf-04: (with COMMENT)
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Benoit Claise has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-isis-auto-conf-04: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-isis-auto-conf/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Some editorial comments: page 3: > It SHOULD not be changed due to device status change (such as interface > enable/disable, interface plug in/off, device reboot, firmware update etc.) The term “due to” is confusing. It might be change to “It SHOULD not be changed until the device status change” or “It SHOULD not be changed as the device status change” according to the meaning. Page 8 > As specified in this document, there are two distinguisher need to be > self-generated, which is System ID and Router-Fingerprint. s/which is/which are Page 9 > In a network device, normally there are resources which provide an > extremely high probability of uniqueness thus could be used as seeds to > derive distinguisher (e.g. hashing or generating pseudo-random numbers), > such as: Suggest to split the sentence to make it more readable.
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