Re: [Isis-wg] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05: (with COMMENT)

Uma Chunduri <uma.chunduri@ericsson.com> Tue, 21 April 2015 16:03 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Isis-wg] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-extended-sequence-no-tlv-05: (with COMMENT)

On 21 Apr 2015, at 9:23, Barry Leiba wrote:

>> -- Section 5, 2nd paragraph: "The implementation SHOULD also allow  
>> operators to control the configuration of 'send' and/or 'verify' the  
>> feature of IS-IS PDUs for the links and for the node."
>>
>> I don't understand the sentence
>
> I think "of 'send' and/or 'verify' the feature" is supposed to be "of 
> the 'send' and/or 'verify' feature".  The "the" is misplaced.
>

That move would make it parse better. I assume it's just a typo or cut/paste error.

[Uma]: Sorry for not getting back on this quickly. Thank you Barry for your correction. 
Ben, I shall update the document and also take care of your other comments. Thx!