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Re: [Isis-wg] IETF Last Call Gen-Art review of draft-ietf-isis-rfc4971bis-01

worley@ariadne.com (Dale R. Worley) Wed, 10 August 2016 19:46 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Isis-wg] IETF Last Call Gen-Art review of draft-ietf-isis-rfc4971bis-01
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"Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com> writes:
> Attached please find an updated version and diffs from previous.
> Please let me know if this adequately addresses your comments.

It looks good to me.  (nit:  Section 4 ends with two successive
periods.)

Dale

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