[Isis-wg] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-pcr-04: (with COMMENT)

["Barry Leiba" <[e-mail]>]

Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-isis-pcr-04: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I was going to ask to discuss this:

   The lowercase forms with an initial capital "Must", "Must Not",
   "Shall", "Shall Not", "Should", "Should Not", "May", and "Optional"
   in this document are to be interpreted in the sense defined in
   [RFC2119], but are used where the normative behavior is defined in
   documents published by SDOs other than the IETF.

...because I think this is a too-subtle distinction that would be
confusing to many readers.  But you don't appear to actually have any
such terms in the document.  Please remove that paragraph.