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Re: [ipwave] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-01.txt - par removed from Introduction

Alexandre Petrescu <alexandre.petrescu@gmail.com> Sun, 12 March 2017 17:43 UTC

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Subject: Re: [ipwave] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-01.txt - par removed from Introduction
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Michelle,

I copy the list on this conversation.

Following your questioning, I propose to remove the following paragrap
from the introduction, since it is too much detail for an Introduction:

> The values of these parameters are precisely the same as IPv6 over
> Ethernet [RFC2464]: the recommended value of MTU to be 1500 octets,
> the Frame Format containing the Type 0x86DD, the rules for forming
> an Interface Identifier, the Address Mapping mechanism and the
> Stateless Address Auto-Configuration.

This paragraph stays in the introduction:
> The document then concentrates on the parameters of layering IP over
> 802.11 OCB as over Ethernet: value of MTU, the contents of Frame
> Format, the rules for forming Interface Identifiers, the mechanism
> for Address Mapping and for State-less Address Auto-configuration.
> These are precisely the same as IPv6 over Ethernet <xref
> target="RFC2464"/>.

Alex

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