Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-16
"Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> Sun, 09 August 2020 11:07 UTC
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Subject: Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-16
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Hi Carlos, Could you go forward with our IPWAVE PS draft? I observed that you prepared a write-up well. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking/shepherdwriteup/ Thanks. Best Regards, Paul On Thu, Jul 30, 2020 at 12:09 AM CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO < cjbc@it.uc3m.es> wrote: > Thanks Paul. It looks good now. > > Carlos > > On Wed, Jul 29, 2020 at 1:57 PM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong < > jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> wrote: > >> Carlos, >> I have submitted the revision -19: >> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-19 >> >> The tool for idnits is found: >> https://www6.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ >> >> The OMNI draft has the latest version of -27: >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-templin-6man-omni-interface/ >> >> Thanks. >> >> Best Regards, >> Paul >> >> On Wed, Jul 29, 2020 at 7:35 PM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong < >> jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> wrote: >> >>> Hi Alex, >>> Thanks for your kind suggestions. >>> But I prefer to use the current structure of the XML file to save time. >>> >>> Carlos, >>> Could you share the URL to check the nits of the I-D, especially unused >>> references, before the submission of the revision? >>> >>> Thanks. >>> >>> Best Regards, >>> Paul >>> >>> 2020년 7월 29일 (수) 오후 6:29, Alexandre Petrescu < >>> alexandre.petrescu@gmail.com>님이 작성: >>> >>>> it is these two nits: >>>> > == Unused Reference: 'RFC6775' is defined on line 1566, but no >>>> explicit >>>> > reference was found in the text >>>> > >>>> > -- Unexpected draft version: The latest known version of >>>> > draft-templin-6man-omni-interface is -07, but you're referring >>>> to -27. >>>> >>>> For the first nit (rfc6775 "6lowpan ND") there are two possibilities: >>>> (1) remove the entire xml group starting with " <reference >>>> anchor="RFC6775">" or (2) ask about how to talk about 6lowpan ND in >>>> vehicular networks. >>>> >>>> For my part, I think I heard at IETF talk about a demo using 6lowpan >>>> technology between cars stationed in a parking. >>>> >>>> For the second nit (omni interface versions -07 vs -27), there are some >>>> strange things with the pointers to the omni draft. >>>> >>>> In tools.ietf.org the most recent version of omni draft is -13 but >>>> there >>>> is a spectacular jump between -07 and -13 without intermediary versions. >>>> There are diffs between -13 and -12 though. There is also a -27 >>>> version indeed at >>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-templin-6man-omni-interface-27 >>>> There is no -28 version. >>>> >>>> For my part, when I write an xml I-D, I use a special way of referring >>>> to another I-D, instead of the typical <reference> used to refer to >>>> non-IETF documents. In the Informative <references> section I use this >>>> kind of text below: >>>> >>>> > <?rfc >>>> > include=" >>>> http://xml2rfc.ietf.org/public/rfc/bibxml3/reference.I-D.ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking >>>> " >>>> > ?> >>>> >>>> Notice there is no version number written in the filename of the draft. >>>> It is then the system that makes sure to add the right version number. >>>> >>>> Alex >>>> >>>> >>>> Le 29/07/2020 à 11:06, CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO a écrit : >>>> > Hi Paul, >>>> > >>>> > It still has some nits: >>>> > >>>> > >>>> https://www6.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-18.txt >>>> > >>>> > Thanks, >>>> > >>>> > Carlos >>>> > >>>> > On Wed, Jul 29, 2020 at 9:49 AM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong >>>> > <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com <mailto:jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>> wrote: >>>> > >>>> > Carlos, >>>> > I have posted the revision -18 that addresses the nits issues: >>>> > >>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-18 >>>> > >>>> > Thanks. >>>> > >>>> > Best Regards, >>>> > Paul >>>> > >>>> > On Wed, Jul 29, 2020 at 4:17 PM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong >>>> > <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com <mailto:jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>> wrote: >>>> > >>>> > Hi Carlos, >>>> > I will include the dummy IANA Section and remove the unused >>>> > references in the revision today. >>>> > >>>> > Thanks. >>>> > >>>> > Best Regards, >>>> > Paul >>>> > >>>> > >>>> > On Wed, Jul 29, 2020 at 3:34 PM CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO >>>> > <cjbc@it.uc3m.es <mailto:cjbc@it.uc3m.es>> wrote: >>>> > >>>> > Hi Paul, >>>> > >>>> > Thanks for the update. Can you please take a look at the >>>> > nits that idnits returns and solve the ones about unused >>>> > references (the rest I think do not really apply)? >>>> > >>>> > >>>> https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-17.txt >>>> > >>>> > Thanks, >>>> > >>>> > Carlos >>>> > >>>> > On Wed, Jul 29, 2020 at 3:36 AM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong >>>> > <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com <mailto:jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>> >>>> wrote: >>>> > >>>> > Hi Russ and Carlos, >>>> > I have posted the revision -17 having Fred's comments >>>> > during the WGLC. >>>> > >>>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-17 >>>> > >>>> > Thanks. >>>> > >>>> > Best Regards, >>>> > Paul >>>> > >>>> > On Tue, Jul 28, 2020 at 10:33 AM Mr. Jaehoon Paul >>>> Jeong >>>> > <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com <mailto: >>>> jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>> >>>> > wrote: >>>> > >>>> > Hi Russ and Carlos, >>>> > I will reflect Fred's suggested text changes >>>> during >>>> > the WGLC. >>>> > I will post the revision by this Wednesday in EST. >>>> > >>>> > Thanks. >>>> > >>>> > Best Regards, >>>> > Paul >>>> > >>>> > On Tue, Jul 28, 2020 at 12:26 AM Russ Housley >>>> > <housley@vigilsec.com <mailto: >>>> housley@vigilsec.com>> >>>> > wrote: >>>> > >>>> > Thanks, Fred.. >>>> > >>>> > Authors, when do you expect to post the next >>>> update? >>>> > >>>> > Russ >>>> > >>>> > >>>> > > On Jul 27, 2020, at 11:23 AM, Templin (US), >>>> > Fred L <Fred.L.Templin@boeing.com >>>> > <mailto:Fred.L.Templin@boeing.com>> wrote: >>>> > > >>>> > > Russ, I was expecting to see a new draft >>>> > version -17 posted that addresses my list >>>> > > comments from 7/13/2020 before the document >>>> > would be sent to the IESG. So, >>>> > > please let us ask the authors to post the >>>> -17 >>>> > and verify that the comments are >>>> > > addressed before sending to the IESG. >>>> > > >>>> > > Thanks - Fred >>>> > > >>>> > >> -----Original Message----- >>>> > >> From: its [mailto:its-bounces@ietf.org >>>> > <mailto:its-bounces@ietf.org>] On Behalf Of >>>> Russ >>>> > Housley >>>> > >> Sent: Monday, July 27, 2020 6:57 AM >>>> > >> To: its <its@ietf.org <mailto: >>>> its@ietf.org>> >>>> > >> Subject: Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for >>>> > draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-16 >>>> > >> >>>> > >> I did not see any objections to this >>>> > document being sent to the IESG. Carlos has >>>> > agree to do the shepherd write-up, and he >>>> will share >>>> > >> it later this week. >>>> > >> >>>> > >> Russ >>>> > >> >>>> > >> >>>> > >>> On Jul 12, 2020, at 12:28 PM, Russ >>>> Housley >>>> > <housley@vigilsec.com >>>> > <mailto:housley@vigilsec.com>> wrote: >>>> > >>> >>>> > >>> This is the IPWAVE WG Last Call for "IPv6 >>>> > Wireless Access in Vehicular Environments >>>> > (IPWAVE): Problem Statement and Use Cases” >>>> > >> >>>> > <draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-16>. >>>> > Please review the document and send your >>>> > comments to the list by 26 July 2020. >>>> > >>> >>>> > >>> The datatracker page for the document is >>>> > >>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking/ >>>> > >>> >>>> > >>> Thanks, >>>> > >>> Russ & Carlos >>>> > >> >>>> > >> >>>> _______________________________________________ >>>> > >> its mailing list >>>> > >> its@ietf.org <mailto:its@ietf.org> >>>> > >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/its >>>> > >>>> > >>>> _______________________________________________ >>>> > its mailing list >>>> > its@ietf.org <mailto:its@ietf.org> >>>> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/its >>>> > >>>> > >>>> > >>>> > -- >>>> > =========================== >>>> > Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. >>>> > Associate Professor >>>> > Department of Computer Science and Engineering >>>> > Sungkyunkwan University >>>> > Office: +82-31-299-4957 >>>> > Email: jaehoon.paul@gmail.com >>>> > <mailto:jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>, >>>> pauljeong@skku.edu >>>> > <mailto:pauljeong@skku.edu> >>>> > Personal Homepage: >>>> > http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php >>>> > <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php> >>>> > >>>> > >>>> > >>>> > -- >>>> > =========================== >>>> > Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. >>>> > Associate Professor >>>> > Department of Computer Science and Engineering >>>> > Sungkyunkwan University >>>> > Office: +82-31-299-4957 >>>> > Email: jaehoon.paul@gmail.com >>>> > <mailto:jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>, pauljeong@skku.edu >>>> > <mailto:pauljeong@skku.edu> >>>> > Personal Homepage: >>>> > http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php >>>> > <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php> >>>> > >>>> > >>>> > >>>> > -- >>>> > =========================== >>>> > Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. >>>> > Associate Professor >>>> > Department of Computer Science and Engineering >>>> > Sungkyunkwan University >>>> > Office: +82-31-299-4957 >>>> > Email: jaehoon.paul@gmail.com <mailto:jaehoon.paul@gmail.com >>>> >, >>>> > pauljeong@skku.edu <mailto:pauljeong@skku.edu> >>>> > Personal Homepage: >>>> > http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php >>>> > <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php> >>>> > >>>> > >>>> > >>>> > -- >>>> > =========================== >>>> > Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. >>>> > Associate Professor >>>> > Department of Computer Science and Engineering >>>> > Sungkyunkwan University >>>> > Office: +82-31-299-4957 >>>> > Email: jaehoon.paul@gmail.com <mailto:jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>, >>>> > pauljeong@skku.edu <mailto:pauljeong@skku.edu> >>>> > Personal Homepage: >>>> http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php >>>> > <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php> >>>> > >>>> > >>>> > _______________________________________________ >>>> > its mailing list >>>> > its@ietf.org >>>> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/its >>>> > >>>> >>>> _______________________________________________ >>>> its mailing list >>>> its@ietf.org >>>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/its >>>> >>> >> >> -- >> =========================== >> Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. >> Associate Professor >> Department of Computer Science and Engineering >> Sungkyunkwan University >> Office: +82-31-299-4957 >> Email: jaehoon.paul@gmail.com, pauljeong@skku.edu >> Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php >> <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php> >> > -- =========================== Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. Associate Professor Department of Computer Science and Engineering Sungkyunkwan University Office: +82-31-299-4957 Email: jaehoon.paul@gmail.com, pauljeong@skku.edu Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php>
- [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-vehic… Russ Housley
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Templin (US), Fred L
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Russ Housley
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Templin (US), Fred L
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Russ Housley
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Alexandre Petrescu
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong