Re: [ipwave] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-34 - ref ro 802.11 standard

["Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <[e-mail]>]

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The PDF of this standard is available at no cost compliments of the IEEE GET program http://ieeexplore.ieee.org/browse/standards/get-program/page/)
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=> https://ieeexplore.ieee.org/document/7786995 

All the best,

Pascal

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Alexandre Petrescu <[e-mail]>
> Sent: lundi 8 avril 2019 18:42
> To: Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <[e-mail]>
> Cc: [e-mail]; [e-mail]; [e-mail]; draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-
> [e-mail]
> Subject: Re: Intdir early review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-34 -
> ref ro 802.11 standard
> 
> 
> Le 04/03/2019 à 12:24, Pascal Thubert a écrit :
> > Reviewer: Pascal Thubert
> > Review result: Not Ready
> >
> [...]
> 
> > Nits
> > ------
> >
> > "
> >     IP packets MUST be transmitted over 802.11-OCB media as QoS Data
> >     frames whose format is specified in IEEE Std 802.11.
> > "
> > Please add link to the reference
> 
> I added like below.
> 
> But beware that:
> - it is the third time we refer to this document in the text.
> - the document behind the URL is behind a paywall, even though the
>    description of the document is free of access.
> 
> 
> NEW:
> >    IP packets MUST be transmitted over 802.11-OCB media as QoS Data
> >    frames whose format is specified in IEEE 802.11(TM) -2016
> >    [IEEE-802.11-2016].
> [...]
> >    [IEEE-802.11-2016]
> >               "IEEE Standard 802.11-2016 - IEEE Standard for Information
> >               Technology - Telecommunications and information exchange
> >               between systems Local and metropolitan area networks -
> >               Specific requirements - Part 11: Wireless LAN Medium
> >               Access Control (MAC) and Physical Layer (PHY)
> >               Specifications. Status - Active Standard.  Description
> >               retrieved freely on September 12th, 2017, at URL
> >               https://standards.ieee.org/findstds/
> >               standard/802.11-2016.html".
> 
> Alex