Re: [ipwave] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15.txt

"Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> Mon, 06 July 2020 14:15 UTC

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Date: Mon, 6 Jul 2020 23:14:55 +0900
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Subject: Re: [ipwave] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15.txt
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Hi Nancy and Peter,
Could you check whether your comments are well-addressed on this revision
or not?

Thanks for your support and help.

Best Regards,
Paul

On Thu, Jul 2, 2020 at 9:49 AM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <
jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi Nancy, Fred, and Peter,
> As you can see, I have submitted the revision of the IPWAVE PS draft..
> If you review my revision, and all your comments are well-addressed,
> could you express your review on this revision in the IPWAVE mailing list
> this week?
>
> We need to move forward to the WGLC of this draft.
>
> Thanks for your support and help.
>
> Best Regards,
> Paul
>
> ---------- Forwarded message ---------
> From: Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
> Date: Mon, Jun 29, 2020 at 6:50 PM
> Subject: Re: [ipwave] I-D Action:
> draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15.txt
> To: <its@ietf.org>
> Cc: Zeungil Kim <ben.kim@hyundai.com>om>, Peter E. Yee <peter@akayla.com>om>,
> Yong-Joon Joe <eugene@lsware.com>om>, skku-iotlab-members <
> skku-iotlab-members@googlegroups.com>gt;, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <
> jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
>
>
> Hi IPWAVE WG,
> I have submitted the revision of IPWAVE PS Draft as follows:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15
>
> The following 8 people reviewed this draft:
>  Nancy Cam-Winget (Cisco),
>  Fred L. Templin (The Boeing Company),
>  Jung-Soo Park (ETRI),
>  Zeungil (Ben) Kim (Hyundai Motors),
>  Kyoungjae Sun (Soongsil University),
>  Zhiwei Yan (CNNIC),
>  Yong-Joon Joe (LSware), and
>  Peter E. Yee (Akayla).
>
> I sincerely appreciate those reviewers' efforts to improve our IPWAVE PS
> WG draft.
>
> I attach the revision letter to show how I have addressed their comments.
>
> The reviewers above (i.e., Nancy, Fred, Jung-Soo, Zeungil, Kyoungjae,
> Zhiwei, Yong-Joon, and Peter),
> Could you doublecheck whether or not my revision has addressed your
> comments by July 5th, 2020 in EST?
>
> If you have further comments, please let me know.
>
> If this review during this period does not raise other further comments, I
> would like to ask for a WGLC on this draft.
>
> Thanks.
>
> Best Regards,
> Paul
>   --
> ===========================
> Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D.
> Associate Professor
> Department of Computer Science and Engineering
> Sungkyunkwan University
> Office: +82-31-299-4957
> Email: jaehoon.paul@gmail.com, pauljeong@skku.edu
> Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php
> <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php>
>
>
> On Mon, Jun 29, 2020 at 6:22 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
>
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the IP Wireless Access in Vehicular
>> Environments WG of the IETF.
>>
>>         Title           : IPv6 Wireless Access in Vehicular Environments
>> (IPWAVE): Problem Statement and Use Cases
>>         Author          : Jaehoon Paul Jeong (editor)
>>         Filename        : draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15.txt
>>         Pages           : 39
>>         Date            : 2020-06-29
>>
>> Abstract:
>>    This document discusses the problem statement and use cases of
>>    IPv6-based vehicular networking for Intelligent Transportation
>>    Systems (ITS).  The main scenarios of vehicular communications are
>>    vehicle-to-vehicle (V2V), vehicle-to-infrastructure (V2I), and
>>    vehicle-to-everything (V2X) communications.  First, this document
>>    explains use cases using V2V, V2I, and V2X networking.  Next, for
>>    IPv6-based vehicular networks, it makes a gap analysis of current
>>    IPv6 protocols (e.g., IPv6 Neighbor Discovery, Mobility Management,
>>    and Security & Privacy), and then lists up requirements for the
>>    extensions of those IPv6 protocols for IPv6-based vehicular
>>    networking.
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking/
>>
>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15
>>
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15
>>
>>
>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
>> submission
>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>
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>
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> ===========================
> Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D.
> Associate Professor
> Department of Computer Science and Engineering
> Sungkyunkwan University
> Office: +82-31-299-4957
> Email: jaehoon.paul@gmail.com, pauljeong@skku.edu
> Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php
> <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php>
>


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Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D.
Associate Professor
Department of Computer Science and Engineering
Sungkyunkwan University
Office: +82-31-299-4957
Email: jaehoon.paul@gmail.com, pauljeong@skku.edu
Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php
<http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php>