Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-16

[Alexandre Petrescu <[e-mail]>]

it is these two nits:
>  == Unused Reference: 'RFC6775' is defined on line 1566, but no explicit
>      reference was found in the text
> 
>   -- Unexpected draft version: The latest known version of 
>      draft-templin-6man-omni-interface is -07, but you're referring to -27.

For the first nit (rfc6775 "6lowpan ND") there are two possibilities:
(1) remove the entire xml group starting with " <reference
anchor="RFC6775">" or (2) ask about how to talk about 6lowpan ND in
vehicular networks.

For my part, I think I heard at IETF talk about a demo using 6lowpan
technology between cars stationed in a parking.

For the second nit (omni interface versions -07  vs -27), there are some
strange things with the pointers to the omni draft.

In tools.ietf.org the most recent version of omni draft is -13 but there
is a spectacular jump between -07 and -13 without intermediary versions.
  There are diffs between -13 and -12 though.  There is also a -27
version indeed at
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-templin-6man-omni-interface-27
There is no -28 version.

For my part, when I write an xml I-D, I use a special way of referring
to another I-D, instead of the typical <reference> used to refer to
non-IETF documents.  In the Informative <references> section I use this
kind of text below:

>       <?rfc
>         include="http://xml2rfc.ietf.org/public/rfc/bibxml3/reference.I-D.ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking"
>       ?>

Notice there is no version number written in the filename of the draft.
  It is then the system that makes sure to add the right version number.

Alex


Le 29/07/2020 à 11:06, CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO a écrit :
> Hi Paul,
> 
> It still has some nits:
> 
> https://www6.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-18.txt
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Carlos
> 
> On Wed, Jul 29, 2020 at 9:49 AM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong 
> <[e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
> 
>     Carlos,
>     I have posted the revision -18 that addresses the nits issues:
>     https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-18
> 
>     Thanks.
> 
>     Best Regards,
>     Paul
> 
>     On Wed, Jul 29, 2020 at 4:17 PM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
>     <[e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
> 
>         Hi Carlos,
>         I will include the dummy IANA Section and remove the unused
>         references in the revision today.
> 
>         Thanks.
> 
>         Best Regards,
>         Paul
> 
> 
>         On Wed, Jul 29, 2020 at 3:34 PM CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO
>         <[e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
> 
>             Hi Paul,
> 
>             Thanks for the update. Can you please take a look at the
>             nits that idnits returns and solve the ones about unused
>             references (the rest I think do not really apply)?
> 
>             https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-17.txt
> 
>             Thanks,
> 
>             Carlos
> 
>             On Wed, Jul 29, 2020 at 3:36 AM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
>             <[e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
> 
>                 Hi Russ and Carlos,
>                 I have posted the revision -17 having Fred's comments
>                 during the WGLC.
>                 https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-17
> 
>                 Thanks.
> 
>                 Best Regards,
>                 Paul
> 
>                 On Tue, Jul 28, 2020 at 10:33 AM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
>                 <[e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>>
>                 wrote:
> 
>                     Hi Russ and Carlos,
>                     I will reflect Fred's suggested text changes during
>                     the WGLC.
>                     I will post the revision by this Wednesday in EST.
> 
>                     Thanks.
> 
>                     Best Regards,
>                     Paul
> 
>                     On Tue, Jul 28, 2020 at 12:26 AM Russ Housley
>                     <[e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>>
>                     wrote:
> 
>                         Thanks, Fred..
> 
>                         Authors, when do you expect to post the next update?
> 
>                         Russ
> 
> 
>                          > On Jul 27, 2020, at 11:23 AM, Templin (US),
>                         Fred L <[e-mail]
>                         <mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
>                          >
>                          > Russ, I was expecting to see a new draft
>                         version -17 posted that addresses my list
>                          > comments from 7/13/2020 before the document
>                         would be sent to the IESG. So,
>                          > please let us ask the authors to post the -17
>                         and verify that the comments are
>                          > addressed before sending to the IESG.
>                          >
>                          > Thanks - Fred
>                          >
>                          >> -----Original Message-----
>                          >> From: its [mailto:[e-mail]
>                         <mailto:[e-mail]>] On Behalf Of Russ
>                         Housley
>                          >> Sent: Monday, July 27, 2020 6:57 AM
>                          >> To: its <[e-mail] <mailto:[e-mail]>>
>                          >> Subject: Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for
>                         draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-16
>                          >>
>                          >> I did not see any objections to this
>                         document being sent to the IESG.  Carlos has
>                         agree to do the shepherd write-up, and he will share
>                          >> it later this week.
>                          >>
>                          >> Russ
>                          >>
>                          >>
>                          >>> On Jul 12, 2020, at 12:28 PM, Russ Housley
>                         <[e-mail]
>                         <mailto:[e-mail]>> wrote:
>                          >>>
>                          >>> This is the IPWAVE WG Last Call for "IPv6
>                         Wireless Access in Vehicular Environments
>                         (IPWAVE): Problem Statement and Use Cases”
>                          >>
>                         <draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-16>. 
>                         Please review the document and send your
>                         comments to the list by 26 July 2020.
>                          >>>
>                          >>> The datatracker page for the document is
>                         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking/
>                          >>>
>                          >>> Thanks,
>                          >>> Russ & Carlos
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