Re: [ipwave] Title of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-45
Nabil Benamar <benamar73@gmail.com> Wed, 29 May 2019 21:45 UTC
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From: Nabil Benamar <benamar73@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 29 May 2019 21:45:36 +0000
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Subject: Re: [ipwave] Title of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-45
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Hi Russ, Pascal That was exactly what I was thinking about the "minimal" term in the title! 'Basic'...works for me. On Wed, May 29, 2019, 21:39 Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> wrote: > I worry that "minimal" sounds like something was left out, but that is not > the case. > > Russ > > > On May 29, 2019, at 5:21 PM, Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <pthubert@cisco.com> > wrote: > > On second thoughts basic reads as barebone but in fact the Ethernet stack > is complex. What we do is minimal changes to it. > > So why exactly does basic seem better to you Russ? > > Pascal > > ------------------------------ > *De :* Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> > *Envoyé :* mercredi, mai 29, 2019 10:51 PM > *À :* Pascal Thubert (pthubert) > *Cc :* its@ietf.org > *Objet :* Re: Title of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-45 > > > Pascal, I think that Basic support ..." would be a better title. > > Rus > > > On May 28, 2019, at 9:52 AM, Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <pthubert@cisco.com> > wrote: > > Dear all: > > Nabil and I are converging on the draft. One open item that deserves the > group’s attention is the title. > > The current title seems to indicate that the draft is **the** way of > doing IPv6 over OCB when in fact it is the way to do that with minimal > change to existing stacks. > As written, it indicates that IPWAVE is done and can close when in fact > the work is just starting with 8 other drafts in progress. My suggestion is > to change the title to add Minimal in it like we did multiple times at > 6TiSCH. > > Suggestion: change the title to: > > Minimal support for IPv6 over IEEE Std 802.11 Networks operating Outside > the Context of a Basic Service Set > > This leaves opening for draft-jeong-ipwave-vehicular-mobility-management, > draft-jeong-ipwave-vehicular-neighbor-discovery, and so on. > > Does that make sense? > > Pascal > > *From:* Pascal Thubert (pthubert) > *Sent:* mardi 28 mai 2019 10:49 > *To:* Nabil Benamar <benamar73@gmail.com> > *Cc:* its@ietf.org > *Subject:* RE: [ipwave] rereview of > draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-45 > > Hello Nabil: > > In the next rev I expect to see text in the intro that states the scope of > reusing legacy stacks with minimal changes. > > Expressed that way, the discussion on legacy ND only and using the > Ethernet distribution system and then a frame translation to 802.11, all > makes full sense. > Also, this prepares for the work that the group has already started, which > involves new stack elements better suited for OCB. > > This should also be in the title. Suggestion for the new title: > > > Minimal support for IPv6 over IEEE Std 802.11 Networks operating Outside > the Context of a Basic Service Set > > > The ‘minimal’ avoids the risk that the reader thinks that this draft has > it all and that IPWAVE can close after that. > > All the best, > > Pascal > > *From:* Nabil Benamar <benamar73@gmail.com> > *Sent:* lundi 27 mai 2019 17:12 > *To:* Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <pthubert@cisco.com> > *Cc:* its@ietf.org > *Subject:* Re: [ipwave] rereview of > draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-45 > > Hi Pascal, > > We are converging :) > > See below > > > Best regards > Nabil Benamar > ------------------- > نبيل بنعمرو > > > > On Mon, May 27, 2019 at 2:47 PM Pascal Thubert (pthubert) < > pthubert@cisco.com> wrote: > > Hello Nabil: > > I removed the places where we already agree. Please see below for the > remaining details > > > > Ø This should be out of scope and inherited from IPv6 over WiFi. If the > draft does not exist then let us do one, at 6MAN. > > Yes, I support this idea to initiate a new draft in 6MAN. I'm in! > > Ø The introduction should clatify the scope, which appears to be do with > what existing stacks can do and (sometimes) see what’s missing. > > Here is the new introduction (first paragraph), are we missing something > else? > > "This document describes the transmission of IPv6 packets on IEEE Std > 802.11-OCB networks [IEEE-802.11-2016] (a.k.a "802.11p" see > Appendix B, Appendix C and Appendix D). This involves the layering > of IPv6 networking on top of the IEEE 802.11 MAC layer, with an LLC > layer. Compared to running IPv6 over the Ethernet MAC layer, there > is no modification expected to IEEE Std 802.11 MAC and Logical Link > sublayers: IPv6 works normally over a single IEEE 802.11-OCB link, > with an LLC layer. Multi-link scenarios are out of scope for the > present document." > > > > Pascal, I have just received a detailed review from some IEEE-802.11 > members, thanks to Dorothy! One of the recommendation is to remove section > 4.2.1 completely. > > > Ø Good, we are converging. > > > > > > I agree. It seems that by describing specific values, the text is > redundant with what’s already in IEEE Std 802.11-2016 > > > - In the <reference> tag to the IEEE spec just use <date/> . This > actually removes the date. Also please remove -2016 from the spec name, > just leave generic 802.11 dateless. > > Ok. > > > - > - Placing a date is misguided since we do not have a dependency on one > particular version of 802.11. Indeed we want your spec to apply to all > versions starting current, which is what is implied by dateless. > > That's perfect. > > > - > > > > > > > Ø Are we sure of that, don’t we map QoS from ToS bits as usual with 11e? > > > Here is the new text to replace that paragraph: > > " “The IPv6 packet transmitted on 802.11-OCB MUST be immediately preceded > by a Logical Link Control (LLC) header and an 802.11 header. In the LLC > header, and in accordance with the EtherType Protocol Discrimination (EPD, > see Appendix E > <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-45#appendix-E>), > the value of the Type field MUST be set to 0x86DD (IPv6). The mapping to > the 802.11 data service MUST use a ‘priority’ value of 1, which specifies > the use of QoS with a “Background” user priority." > > > Ø Can’t we use different QoS values like we can on WiFi? > > That was the recommendation of IEEE 802.11 members, and I updated the > draft based on your review and their recommendations. Please feel free to > suggest other text here. > > > > > > To simplify the Application Programming Interface (API) between the > operating system and the 802.11-OCB media, device drivers MAY > implement an Ethernet Adaptation Layer that translates Ethernet II > frames to the 802.11 format and vice versa. An Ethernet Adaptation > Layer is described in Section 4.2.1. > > > Ø Do not call that an adaptation layer. The may refers to using an > Ethernet stack and then a translation from Ethernet Frames to 802.11 frames > as specified by IEEE. > > What do you suggest instead? > > > > Ø Maybe that “an implementation may IPv6 over Ethernet per RFC 2464 > and then a frame translation from 802.3 to 802.11 in order to minimize the > code changes”. > > Ø If minimal impact on the stack is the actual goal of this draft, > which I think it is. This is what justifies publish this hastily and then > do the real work that implies larger changes. > > Ø > > Sounds good for me! > > > > > > > > 4.4. Stateless Autoconfiguration > > There are several types of IPv6 addresses [RFC4291], [RFC4193], that > MAY be assigned to an 802.11-OCB interface. This section describes > the formation of Interface Identifiers for IPv6 addresses of type > 'Global' or 'Unique Local'. For Interface Identifiers for IPv6 > address of type 'Link-Local' see Section 4.3. > > > Ø Not really interesting. More important is to say that autoconf is > defined in RFC 4862 and that is missing. > > Didn't get your point! What is missing? > > > > > Ø IPv6 autoconf is described in RFC 4862. This section does not refer > to it, but rather duplicates the previous about address types, which is far > from interesting. > > Ø I suggest you remove the text above and add a sentence that roughly > introduce RFC 4862. Note that RFC 8505 does not change the > autoconfiguration though it changes the way DAD is achieved. > > > Ok. I will include it in -46 > > > > > Ø MUST +> MAY. Say the scope of this doc only considers ND but neither > RFC 8505 nor IPWAVE drafts. > > > Here is the new text as agreed last time with Brian: > > "The baseline Neighbor Discovery protocol (ND) [RFC4861] MUST be > supported over 802.11-OCB links." > > > > > Ø Yes, that works. > > > > > Ø Remove or turn it the other way around like future solutions to OCB > should consider solutions for avoiding broadcast. > > I will reformulate in the following manner: > > Transmitting ND packets may prove to have some performance issues. These > issues may be exacerbated in OCB > mode. Future solutions to OCB should consider solutions for avoiding > broadcast. The best of current knowledge indicates the kinds of issues > that may arise with ND in OCB mode; they are described in Appendix J. > > > > Ø Good > > > > > > All the best, > > Pascal > > > > Thank you once again. > > I will publish version 46 soon. > > > > > Ø Please ping me when done; do not forget to scope the document so > that it is minimizing changes to existing stack and leveraging Ethernet > implementation, with IPv6 ND and so on, and a focus on P2P over link local. > > All the best, > > Pascal > > > Thank you, Pascal for your time. > > > _______________________________________________ > its mailing list > its@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/its >
- [ipwave] Title of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-802… Pascal Thubert (pthubert)
- Re: [ipwave] Title of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over… Abdussalam Baryun
- Re: [ipwave] Title of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over… Russ Housley
- Re: [ipwave] Title of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over… Pascal Thubert (pthubert)
- Re: [ipwave] Title of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over… Pascal Thubert (pthubert)
- Re: [ipwave] Title of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over… Russ Housley
- Re: [ipwave] Title of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over… Nabil Benamar
- Re: [ipwave] Title of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over… Pascal Thubert (pthubert)
- Re: [ipwave] Title of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over… CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO
- Re: [ipwave] Title of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over… Sri Gundavelli (sgundave)
- Re: [ipwave] Title of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over… Pascal Thubert (pthubert)