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Re: [ipwave] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-34 - sequencing the LL and SLAAC sections closer

Alexandre Petrescu <alexandre.petrescu@gmail.com> Mon, 08 April 2019 09:52 UTC

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Subject: Re: [ipwave] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-34 - sequencing the LL and SLAAC sections closer
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Le 04/03/2019 à 12:24, Pascal Thubert a écrit :
> Reviewer: Pascal Thubert
> Review result: Not Ready
> 
[...]
> Could you make sections 4.3 and 4.5 contiguous?

I would re-order them, if you dont mind.

Alex

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