Re: [ipwave] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15.txt

"Z.W. Yan" <yan@cnnic.cn> Thu, 09 July 2020 00:42 UTC

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Subject: Re: [ipwave] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15.txt
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Hi Paul and IPWAVE WG,
I have chacked the document with the current version, thank you for Paul's efforts to update and revise it which has addressed all my comments.
I think it can be pushed forward.

Best Regards,
Z.W. Yan
 
From: Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
Date: 2020-06-29 17:43
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CC: Nancy Cam-Winget (ncamwing); Templin (US), Fred L; JungSoo Park; Zeungil Kim; Kyoungjae Sun; Z.W. Yan; Yong-Joon Joe; Peter E. Yee; CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO; Russ Housley; Erik Kline; skku-iotlab-members; Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
Subject: Re: [ipwave] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15.txt
Hi IPWAVE WG,
I have submitted the revision of IPWAVE PS Draft as follows:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15 
 
The following 8 people reviewed this draft:
 Nancy Cam-Winget (Cisco),
 Fred L. Templin (The Boeing Company), 
 Jung-Soo Park (ETRI), 
 Zeungil (Ben) Kim (Hyundai Motors), 
 Kyoungjae Sun (Soongsil University), 
 Zhiwei Yan (CNNIC), 
 Yong-Joon Joe (LSware), and 
 Peter E. Yee (Akayla).

I sincerely appreciate those reviewers' efforts to improve our IPWAVE PS WG draft.

I attach the revision letter to show how I have addressed their comments.

The reviewers above (i.e., Nancy, Fred, Jung-Soo, Zeungil, Kyoungjae, Zhiwei, Yong-Joon, and Peter),
Could you doublecheck whether or not my revision has addressed your comments by July 5th, 2020 in EST?

If this review during this period does not raise other further comments, I would like to ask for a WGLC on this draft.

Thanks.

Best Regards,
Paul
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On Mon, Jun 29, 2020 at 6:22 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the IP Wireless Access in Vehicular Environments WG of the IETF.

        Title           : IPv6 Wireless Access in Vehicular Environments (IPWAVE): Problem Statement and Use Cases
        Author          : Jaehoon Paul Jeong (editor)
        Filename        : draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15.txt
        Pages           : 39
        Date            : 2020-06-29

Abstract:
   This document discusses the problem statement and use cases of
   IPv6-based vehicular networking for Intelligent Transportation
   Systems (ITS).  The main scenarios of vehicular communications are
   vehicle-to-vehicle (V2V), vehicle-to-infrastructure (V2I), and
   vehicle-to-everything (V2X) communications.  First, this document
   explains use cases using V2V, V2I, and V2X networking.  Next, for
   IPv6-based vehicular networks, it makes a gap analysis of current
   IPv6 protocols (e.g., IPv6 Neighbor Discovery, Mobility Management,
   and Security & Privacy), and then lists up requirements for the
   extensions of those IPv6 protocols for IPv6-based vehicular
   networking.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking/

There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15


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