Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-16
"Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> Wed, 29 July 2020 11:57 UTC
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From: "Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 29 Jul 2020 20:57:14 +0900
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To: Alexandre Petrescu <alexandre.petrescu@gmail.com>, CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <cjbc@it.uc3m.es>
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Subject: Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-16
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Carlos, I have submitted the revision -19: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-19 The tool for idnits is found: https://www6.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ The OMNI draft has the latest version of -27: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-templin-6man-omni-interface/ Thanks. Best Regards, Paul On Wed, Jul 29, 2020 at 7:35 PM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong < jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi Alex, > Thanks for your kind suggestions. > But I prefer to use the current structure of the XML file to save time. > > Carlos, > Could you share the URL to check the nits of the I-D, especially unused > references, before the submission of the revision? > > Thanks. > > Best Regards, > Paul > > 2020년 7월 29일 (수) 오후 6:29, Alexandre Petrescu <alexandre.petrescu@gmail.com>님이 > 작성: > >> it is these two nits: >> > == Unused Reference: 'RFC6775' is defined on line 1566, but no explicit >> > reference was found in the text >> > >> > -- Unexpected draft version: The latest known version of >> > draft-templin-6man-omni-interface is -07, but you're referring to >> -27. >> >> For the first nit (rfc6775 "6lowpan ND") there are two possibilities: >> (1) remove the entire xml group starting with " <reference >> anchor="RFC6775">" or (2) ask about how to talk about 6lowpan ND in >> vehicular networks. >> >> For my part, I think I heard at IETF talk about a demo using 6lowpan >> technology between cars stationed in a parking. >> >> For the second nit (omni interface versions -07 vs -27), there are some >> strange things with the pointers to the omni draft. >> >> In tools.ietf.org the most recent version of omni draft is -13 but there >> is a spectacular jump between -07 and -13 without intermediary versions. >> There are diffs between -13 and -12 though. There is also a -27 >> version indeed at >> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-templin-6man-omni-interface-27 >> There is no -28 version. >> >> For my part, when I write an xml I-D, I use a special way of referring >> to another I-D, instead of the typical <reference> used to refer to >> non-IETF documents. In the Informative <references> section I use this >> kind of text below: >> >> > <?rfc >> > include=" >> http://xml2rfc.ietf.org/public/rfc/bibxml3/reference.I-D.ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking >> " >> > ?> >> >> Notice there is no version number written in the filename of the draft. >> It is then the system that makes sure to add the right version number. >> >> Alex >> >> >> Le 29/07/2020 à 11:06, CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO a écrit : >> > Hi Paul, >> > >> > It still has some nits: >> > >> > >> https://www6.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-18.txt >> > >> > Thanks, >> > >> > Carlos >> > >> > On Wed, Jul 29, 2020 at 9:49 AM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong >> > <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com <mailto:jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>> wrote: >> > >> > Carlos, >> > I have posted the revision -18 that addresses the nits issues: >> > >> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-18 >> > >> > Thanks. >> > >> > Best Regards, >> > Paul >> > >> > On Wed, Jul 29, 2020 at 4:17 PM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong >> > <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com <mailto:jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>> wrote: >> > >> > Hi Carlos, >> > I will include the dummy IANA Section and remove the unused >> > references in the revision today. >> > >> > Thanks. >> > >> > Best Regards, >> > Paul >> > >> > >> > On Wed, Jul 29, 2020 at 3:34 PM CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO >> > <cjbc@it.uc3m.es <mailto:cjbc@it.uc3m.es>> wrote: >> > >> > Hi Paul, >> > >> > Thanks for the update. Can you please take a look at the >> > nits that idnits returns and solve the ones about unused >> > references (the rest I think do not really apply)? >> > >> > >> https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-17.txt >> > >> > Thanks, >> > >> > Carlos >> > >> > On Wed, Jul 29, 2020 at 3:36 AM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong >> > <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com <mailto:jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>> >> wrote: >> > >> > Hi Russ and Carlos, >> > I have posted the revision -17 having Fred's comments >> > during the WGLC. >> > >> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-17 >> > >> > Thanks. >> > >> > Best Regards, >> > Paul >> > >> > On Tue, Jul 28, 2020 at 10:33 AM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong >> > <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com <mailto:jaehoon.paul@gmail.com >> >> >> > wrote: >> > >> > Hi Russ and Carlos, >> > I will reflect Fred's suggested text changes during >> > the WGLC. >> > I will post the revision by this Wednesday in EST. >> > >> > Thanks. >> > >> > Best Regards, >> > Paul >> > >> > On Tue, Jul 28, 2020 at 12:26 AM Russ Housley >> > <housley@vigilsec.com <mailto:housley@vigilsec.com >> >> >> > wrote: >> > >> > Thanks, Fred.. >> > >> > Authors, when do you expect to post the next >> update? >> > >> > Russ >> > >> > >> > > On Jul 27, 2020, at 11:23 AM, Templin (US), >> > Fred L <Fred.L.Templin@boeing.com >> > <mailto:Fred.L.Templin@boeing.com>> wrote: >> > > >> > > Russ, I was expecting to see a new draft >> > version -17 posted that addresses my list >> > > comments from 7/13/2020 before the document >> > would be sent to the IESG. So, >> > > please let us ask the authors to post the -17 >> > and verify that the comments are >> > > addressed before sending to the IESG. >> > > >> > > Thanks - Fred >> > > >> > >> -----Original Message----- >> > >> From: its [mailto:its-bounces@ietf.org >> > <mailto:its-bounces@ietf.org>] On Behalf Of >> Russ >> > Housley >> > >> Sent: Monday, July 27, 2020 6:57 AM >> > >> To: its <its@ietf.org <mailto:its@ietf.org >> >> >> > >> Subject: Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for >> > draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-16 >> > >> >> > >> I did not see any objections to this >> > document being sent to the IESG. Carlos has >> > agree to do the shepherd write-up, and he will >> share >> > >> it later this week. >> > >> >> > >> Russ >> > >> >> > >> >> > >>> On Jul 12, 2020, at 12:28 PM, Russ Housley >> > <housley@vigilsec.com >> > <mailto:housley@vigilsec.com>> wrote: >> > >>> >> > >>> This is the IPWAVE WG Last Call for "IPv6 >> > Wireless Access in Vehicular Environments >> > (IPWAVE): Problem Statement and Use Cases” >> > >> >> > <draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-16>. >> > Please review the document and send your >> > comments to the list by 26 July 2020. >> > >>> >> > >>> The datatracker page for the document is >> > >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking/ >> > >>> >> > >>> Thanks, >> > >>> Russ & Carlos >> > >> >> > >> >> _______________________________________________ >> > >> its mailing list >> > >> its@ietf.org <mailto:its@ietf.org> >> > >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/its >> > >> > _______________________________________________ >> > its mailing list >> > its@ietf.org <mailto:its@ietf.org> >> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/its >> > >> > >> > >> > -- >> > =========================== >> > Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. >> > Associate Professor >> > Department of Computer Science and Engineering >> > Sungkyunkwan University >> > Office: +82-31-299-4957 >> > Email: jaehoon.paul@gmail.com >> > <mailto:jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>, pauljeong@skku.edu >> > <mailto:pauljeong@skku.edu> >> > Personal Homepage: >> > http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php >> > <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php> >> > >> > >> > >> > -- >> > =========================== >> > Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. >> > Associate Professor >> > Department of Computer Science and Engineering >> > Sungkyunkwan University >> > Office: +82-31-299-4957 >> > Email: jaehoon.paul@gmail.com >> > <mailto:jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>, pauljeong@skku.edu >> > <mailto:pauljeong@skku.edu> >> > Personal Homepage: >> > http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php >> > <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php> >> > >> > >> > >> > -- >> > =========================== >> > Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. >> > Associate Professor >> > Department of Computer Science and Engineering >> > Sungkyunkwan University >> > Office: +82-31-299-4957 >> > Email: jaehoon.paul@gmail.com <mailto:jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>, >> > pauljeong@skku.edu <mailto:pauljeong@skku.edu> >> > Personal Homepage: >> > http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php >> > <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php> >> > >> > >> > >> > -- >> > =========================== >> > Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. >> > Associate Professor >> > Department of Computer Science and Engineering >> > Sungkyunkwan University >> > Office: +82-31-299-4957 >> > Email: jaehoon.paul@gmail.com <mailto:jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>, >> > pauljeong@skku.edu <mailto:pauljeong@skku.edu> >> > Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php >> > <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php> >> > >> > >> > _______________________________________________ >> > its mailing list >> > its@ietf.org >> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/its >> > >> >> _______________________________________________ >> its mailing list >> its@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/its >> > -- =========================== Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D. Associate Professor Department of Computer Science and Engineering Sungkyunkwan University Office: +82-31-299-4957 Email: jaehoon.paul@gmail.com, pauljeong@skku.edu Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php>
- [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-vehic… Russ Housley
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Templin (US), Fred L
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Russ Housley
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Templin (US), Fred L
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Russ Housley
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Alexandre Petrescu
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO
- Re: [ipwave] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-ipwave-v… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong