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Re: [ipwave] Éric Vyncke's Discuss on draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-28: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com> Wed, 25 May 2022 11:32 UTC

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From: Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com>
To: "Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
CC: Éric Vyncke <evyncke@cisco.com>, Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>, Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>, Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>, Murray Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>, Paul Wouters <paul.wouters@aiven.io>, Robert Wilton <rwilton@cisco.com>, Daniel Migault <daniel.migault@ericsson.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, Pascal Thubert <pthubert@cisco.com>, CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <cjbc@it.uc3m.es>, "its@ietf.org" <its@ietf.org>, Chris Shen <shenyiwen7@gmail.com>, skku-iotlab-members <skku-iotlab-members@googlegroups.com>
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Looks good. Thanks agian for addressing my comments.

//Zahed

> On 25 May 2022, at 12:52, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi Zahed,
> According to your comment, I will change the last sentence in the Abstract of
> the revision of this document as follows:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
> - OLD:
> Next, for IPv6-based vehicular networks, it makes a gap analysis of current
> IPv6 protocols (e.g., IPv6 Neighbor Discovery, Mobility Management,
> and Security & Privacy), and then enumerates gaps for the extensions
> of those IPv6 protocols for IPv6-based vehicular networking.
> 
> - NEW:
> Next, for IPv6-based vehicular networks, it makes a gap analysis of current
> IPv6 protocols (e.g., IPv6 Neighbor Discovery, Mobility Management,
> and Security & Privacy).
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
> 
> Thanks.
> 
> Best Regards,
> Paul
> 
> On Wed, May 25, 2022 at 12:54 PM Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com <mailto:zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com>> wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> Thanks for addressing my comments.
> 
> I think all of those looks nice. However, the changes in abstract still does not seems right. This part - “enumerates gaps for the extensions of those
> IPv6 protocols” seems still unnecessary and does not add any extra information to the term “gap analysis”
> 
> //Zahed
> 
>> On 19 May 2022, at 21:31, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com <mailto:jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>> wrote:
>> 
>> <Revision-Letter-on-IPWAVE-PS-Document-29-2022-05-19-v1.pdf>
>

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