Re: [ipwave] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-46
Alexandre Petrescu <alexandre.petrescu@gmail.com> Tue, 18 June 2019 10:24 UTC
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Subject: Re: [ipwave] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-46
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It is a good idea. It would unlock an important issue in the IPWAVE WG. Le 18/06/2019 à 11:26, Roni Even (A) a écrit : > Hi, Maybe use similar language as in > https://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-09.txt > > For the protection of drivers' privacy, the pseudonym of a MAC > address of a vehicle's network interface should be used, with the > help of which the MAC address can be changed periodically. YEs, and use 'MAY' instead of 'should'. > I only found the sentence " The policy dictating when the MAC address > is changed on the 802.11-OCB interface is to-be-determined" as too > weak. I agree, it begs for clarification. Alex > > > Roni > > -----Original Message----- From: ietf [mailto:ietf-bounces@ietf.org] > On Behalf Of Alexandre Petrescu Sent: Tuesday, June 18, 2019 12:10 > PM To: ietf@ietf.org Subject: Re: [ipwave] [Gen-art] Genart last call > review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-46 > > Hi, I understand the text makes one think the way you do. > > Privacy is indeed a major issue in vehicular networks. > > I dont know how to better formulate this MAC address change such as > to be ready for the future, and also be compatible with the present. > > 1609.4 is not implemented in all places. Those who implement 1609.4 > do not implement IPv6-over-OCB. 1609.4 implementations, such as all > 1609 implementations, come with a high cost in software, hardware and > necessary skillset. > > IPv6-over-OCB comes at significantly lower cost in the three. > > Alex > > Le 18/06/2019 à 10:40, Roni Even (A) a écrit : >> Hi, >> >> I am not a security expert, I was just trying to reflect that when >> reading the document I got the impression that privacy is a major >> concern since the IP-OBU is moving and its location can be traced >> by sniffing the MAC addresses. >> >> Maybe it will be good to have a security review of the document. I >> also noticed that there is support in IEEE SA - 1609.4-2016 for >> MAC address change. >> >> Roni Even >> >> *From:*Dick Roy [mailto:dickroy@alum.mit.edu] *Sent:* Monday, June >> 17, 2019 10:48 PM *To:* Roni Even (A); 'NABIL BENAMAR'; 'Roni >> Even' *Cc:* gen-art@ietf.org; 'IETF Discussion'; its@ietf.org; >> draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb.all@ietf.org *Subject:* RE: >> [ipwave] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of >> draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-46 >> >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >> >> -- >> >> *From:*its [mailto:its-bounces@ietf.org] *On Behalf Of *Roni Even >> (A) *Sent:* Monday, June 17, 2019 6:26 AM *To:* NABIL BENAMAR; Roni >> Even *Cc:* gen-art@ietf.org <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>; IETF >> Discussion; its@ietf.org <mailto:its@ietf.org>; >> draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb.all@ietf.org >> <mailto:draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb.all@ietf.org> >> *Subject:* Re: [ipwave] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of >> draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-46 >> >> Thanks, >> >> The only comment left is: >> >> >> 2. In section 5.2 "The policy dictating when the MAC address is >> changed on the 802.11-OCB interface is to-be-determined.". Reading >> the next sentence it looks to me that this is needed as part of >> the solution and should not be left for the unknown future. >> >> Should we reformulate here? >> >> I was expecting some recommendation since the changing of MAC >> address is important to address privacy issues (discussed in >> section 5). Currently it is left open with no recommendation , only >> saying that dynamic change of MAC address is needed. >> >> Maybe the document should have some normative language for example >> in section 5.1 that will say that IP-OBU MUST dynamic change their >> MAC addresses >> >> */[RR] I highly recommend AGAINST this! There will be a number >> OBU and RSU implementations that DO NOT require anonymity, and >> don't want it either. Furthermore, immutable identifier change >> must be coordinated with all other interfaces and protocols >> otherwise changing them is useless./* >> >> Did the document go through security area review? >> >> */[RR] If it did, and the above was not mentioned, then something >> was missed./* >> >> Roni >> >> *From:*Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-bounces@ietf.org] *On Behalf Of >> *NABIL BENAMAR *Sent:* Monday, June 17, 2019 12:48 PM *To:* Roni >> Even *Cc:* gen-art@ietf.org <mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>; IETF >> Discussion; its@ietf.org <mailto:its@ietf.org>; >> draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb.all@ietf.org >> <mailto:draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb.all@ietf.org> >> *Subject:* Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of >> draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-46 >> >> Dear Roni, >> >> Thank you for your review. >> >> Please, see my answers below. >> >> On Sun, Jun 16, 2019, 09:52 Roni Even via Datatracker >> <noreply@ietf.org <mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote: >> >> Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Almost Ready >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General >> Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being >> processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these >> comments just like any other last call comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-?? Reviewer: Roni >> Even Review Date: 2019-06-16 IETF LC End Date: 2019-06-26 IESG >> Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat >> >> Summary: The document is almost ready for publication as a standard >> track RFC >> >> Major issues: >> >> Minor issues: >> >> 1. Section 4.2 says "IP packets MUST be transmitted over >> 802.11-OCB media as QoS Data" while appendix F say "The STA may >> send data frames of subtype Data, Null, QoS Data, and QoS Null. >> >> I will update the appendix to reflect the text in section 4.2. >> >> >> 2. In section 5.2 "The policy dictating when the MAC address is >> changed on the 802.11-OCB interface is to-be-determined.". Reading >> the next sentence it looks to me that this is needed as part of the >> solution and should not be left for the unknown future. >> >> Should we reformulate here? >> >> >> 3. In Appendix I 4th paragraph " However, this does not apply if >> TBD TBD TBD. " ... What are the TBDs? >> >> The whole sentence will be removed. >> >> >> Nits/editorial comments: 1. In appendix I last paragraph "Support >> of RFC 8505 is may be implemented on OCB." should be "Support of >> RFC 8505 may be implemented on OCB." 2. In Appendix I "OCB nodes >> that support RFC 8505 would support the 6LN operation in order to >> act as a host". I think that instead of "would" it should be >> "should" also if this is a recommendation why not have this >> paragraph not in an appendix with "MAY" and "SHOULD >> >> Agreed. >> > >
- [ipwave] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ip… Roni Even via Datatracker
- Re: [ipwave] Genart last call review of draft-iet… NABIL BENAMAR
- Re: [ipwave] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of… Roni Even (A)
- Re: [ipwave] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of… Alexandre Petrescu
- Re: [ipwave] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of… NABIL BENAMAR
- Re: [ipwave] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of… Roni Even (A)
- Re: [ipwave] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of… Alexandre Petrescu
- Re: [ipwave] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of… NABIL BENAMAR
- Re: [ipwave] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of… Roni Even (A)
- Re: [ipwave] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [ipwave] [Gen-art] Genart last call review of… Alexandre Petrescu