Re: [ipwave] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15.txt

"Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> Mon, 29 June 2020 09:43 UTC

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Hi IPWAVE WG,
I have submitted the revision of IPWAVE PS Draft as follows:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15

The following 8 people reviewed this draft:
 Nancy Cam-Winget (Cisco),
 Fred L. Templin (The Boeing Company),
 Jung-Soo Park (ETRI),
 Zeungil (Ben) Kim (Hyundai Motors),
 Kyoungjae Sun (Soongsil University),
 Zhiwei Yan (CNNIC),
 Yong-Joon Joe (LSware), and
 Peter E. Yee (Akayla).

I sincerely appreciate those reviewers' efforts to improve our IPWAVE PS WG
draft.

I attach the revision letter to show how I have addressed their comments.

The reviewers above (i.e., Nancy, Fred, Jung-Soo, Zeungil, Kyoungjae,
Zhiwei, Yong-Joon, and Peter),
Could you doublecheck whether or not my revision has addressed your
comments by July 5th, 2020 in EST?

If this review during this period does not raise other further comments, I
would like to ask for a WGLC on this draft.

Thanks.

Best Regards,
Paul
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On Mon, Jun 29, 2020 at 6:22 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the IP Wireless Access in Vehicular
> Environments WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : IPv6 Wireless Access in Vehicular Environments
> (IPWAVE): Problem Statement and Use Cases
>         Author          : Jaehoon Paul Jeong (editor)
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15.txt
>         Pages           : 39
>         Date            : 2020-06-29
>
> Abstract:
>    This document discusses the problem statement and use cases of
>    IPv6-based vehicular networking for Intelligent Transportation
>    Systems (ITS).  The main scenarios of vehicular communications are
>    vehicle-to-vehicle (V2V), vehicle-to-infrastructure (V2I), and
>    vehicle-to-everything (V2X) communications.  First, this document
>    explains use cases using V2V, V2I, and V2X networking.  Next, for
>    IPv6-based vehicular networks, it makes a gap analysis of current
>    IPv6 protocols (e.g., IPv6 Neighbor Discovery, Mobility Management,
>    and Security & Privacy), and then lists up requirements for the
>    extensions of those IPv6 protocols for IPv6-based vehicular
>    networking.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15
>
>
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> submission
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