Re: [ipwave] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15.txt

Jung-Soo Park <pjs@etri.re.kr> Mon, 06 July 2020 07:03 UTC

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Subject: Re: [ipwave] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15.txt
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Hi Paul and IPWAVE WG,

Thanks for Paul's efforts about the revised draft.
About my comments, I think this draft is well reflected.
I hope we have the next step.

Best Regards,
JungSoo, PARK

On Tue, Jun 30, 2020 at 8:19 PM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <
jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi IPWAVE WG,
> I have submitted the revision of IPWAVE PS Draft as follows:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15
>
> The following 8 people reviewed this draft:
>  Nancy Cam-Winget (Cisco),
>  Fred L. Templin (The Boeing Company),
>  Jung-Soo Park (ETRI),
>  Zeungil (Ben) Kim (Hyundai Motors),
>  Kyoungjae Sun (Soongsil University),
>  Zhiwei Yan (CNNIC),
>  Yong-Joon Joe (LSware), and
>  Peter E. Yee (Akayla).
>
> I sincerely appreciate those reviewers' efforts to improve our IPWAVE PS
> WG draft.
>
> I attach the revision letter to show how I have addressed their comments.
>
> The reviewers above (i.e., Nancy, Fred, Jung-Soo, Zeungil, Kyoungjae,
> Zhiwei, Yong-Joon, and Peter),
> Could you doublecheck whether or not my revision has addressed your
> comments by July 5th, 2020 in EST?
>
> If this review during this period does not raise other further comments, I
> would like to ask for a WGLC on this draft.
>
> Thanks.
>
> Best Regards,
> Paul
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> On Mon, Jun 29, 2020 at 6:22 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
>
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the IP Wireless Access in Vehicular
>> Environments WG of the IETF.
>>
>>         Title           : IPv6 Wireless Access in Vehicular Environments
>> (IPWAVE): Problem Statement and Use Cases
>>         Author          : Jaehoon Paul Jeong (editor)
>>         Filename        : draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15.txt
>>         Pages           : 39
>>         Date            : 2020-06-29
>>
>> Abstract:
>>    This document discusses the problem statement and use cases of
>>    IPv6-based vehicular networking for Intelligent Transportation
>>    Systems (ITS).  The main scenarios of vehicular communications are
>>    vehicle-to-vehicle (V2V), vehicle-to-infrastructure (V2I), and
>>    vehicle-to-everything (V2X) communications.  First, this document
>>    explains use cases using V2V, V2I, and V2X networking.  Next, for
>>    IPv6-based vehicular networks, it makes a gap analysis of current
>>    IPv6 protocols (e.g., IPv6 Neighbor Discovery, Mobility Management,
>>    and Security & Privacy), and then lists up requirements for the
>>    extensions of those IPv6 protocols for IPv6-based vehicular
>>    networking.
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking/
>>
>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15
>>
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15
>>
>>
>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
>> submission
>> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>
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