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Re: [ipwave] Éric Vyncke's Discuss on draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-28: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com> Wed, 25 May 2022 03:55 UTC

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From: Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com>
To: "Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
CC: Éric Vyncke <evyncke@cisco.com>, Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>, Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>, Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>, Murray Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>, Paul Wouters <paul.wouters@aiven.io>, Robert Wilton <rwilton@cisco.com>, Daniel Migault <daniel.migault@ericsson.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, Pascal Thubert <pthubert@cisco.com>, CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <cjbc@it.uc3m.es>, "its@ietf.org" <its@ietf.org>, Chris Shen <shenyiwen7@gmail.com>, skku-iotlab-members <skku-iotlab-members@googlegroups.com>
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Hi,

Thanks for addressing my comments.

I think all of those looks nice. However, the changes in abstract still does not seems right. This part - “enumerates gaps for the extensions of those
IPv6 protocols” seems still unnecessary and does not add any extra information to the term “gap analysis”

//Zahed

> On 19 May 2022, at 21:31, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> <Revision-Letter-on-IPWAVE-PS-Document-29-2022-05-19-v1.pdf>

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