Re: [ipwave] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15.txt

선경재 <gomjae@dcn.ssu.ac.kr> Fri, 03 July 2020 02:07 UTC

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Hi Paul and IPWAVE WG,

In my opinion, the new version of this draft is mostly well reflected in my review comments on the previous version.

Thank you for Paul's efforts to update the documentation, and I look forward to the next step for the updated documentation.

Best Regards,

KJ


Kyoungjae Sun / K. J. SUN
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> 2020. 6. 29. 오후 6:50, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> 작성:
> 
> Hi IPWAVE WG,
> I have submitted the revision of IPWAVE PS Draft as follows:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15 <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15> 
>  
> The following 8 people reviewed this draft:
>  Nancy Cam-Winget (Cisco),
>  Fred L. Templin (The Boeing Company), 
>  Jung-Soo Park (ETRI), 
>  Zeungil (Ben) Kim (Hyundai Motors), 
>  Kyoungjae Sun (Soongsil University), 
>  Zhiwei Yan (CNNIC), 
>  Yong-Joon Joe (LSware), and 
>  Peter E. Yee (Akayla).
> 
> I sincerely appreciate those reviewers' efforts to improve our IPWAVE PS WG draft.
> 
> I attach the revision letter to show how I have addressed their comments.
> 
> The reviewers above (i.e., Nancy, Fred, Jung-Soo, Zeungil, Kyoungjae, Zhiwei, Yong-Joon, and Peter),
> Could you doublecheck whether or not my revision has addressed your comments by July 5th, 2020 in EST?
> 
> If you have further comments, please let me know.
> 
> If this review during this period does not raise other further comments, I would like to ask for a WGLC on this draft.
> 
> Thanks.
> 
> Best Regards,
> Paul
>   --
> ===========================
> Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D.
> Associate Professor
> Department of Computer Science and Engineering
> Sungkyunkwan University
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> Email: jaehoon.paul@gmail.com <mailto:jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>, pauljeong@skku.edu <mailto:pauljeong@skku.edu>
> Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php <http://cpslab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php>
> 
> 
> On Mon, Jun 29, 2020 at 6:22 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org <mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org>> wrote:
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the IP Wireless Access in Vehicular Environments WG of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : IPv6 Wireless Access in Vehicular Environments (IPWAVE): Problem Statement and Use Cases
>         Author          : Jaehoon Paul Jeong (editor)
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15.txt
>         Pages           : 39
>         Date            : 2020-06-29
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document discusses the problem statement and use cases of
>    IPv6-based vehicular networking for Intelligent Transportation
>    Systems (ITS).  The main scenarios of vehicular communications are
>    vehicle-to-vehicle (V2V), vehicle-to-infrastructure (V2I), and
>    vehicle-to-everything (V2X) communications.  First, this document
>    explains use cases using V2V, V2I, and V2X networking.  Next, for
>    IPv6-based vehicular networks, it makes a gap analysis of current
>    IPv6 protocols (e.g., IPv6 Neighbor Discovery, Mobility Management,
>    and Security & Privacy), and then lists up requirements for the
>    extensions of those IPv6 protocols for IPv6-based vehicular
>    networking.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking/>
> 
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15 <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15 <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15>
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15 <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-15>
> 
> 
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org <http://tools.ietf.org/>.
> 
> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ <ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/>
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