Re: [ipwave] Intdir early review of draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-34 - ref ro 802.11 standard

[Alexandre Petrescu <[e-mail]>]

Le 04/03/2019 à 12:24, Pascal Thubert a écrit :
> Reviewer: Pascal Thubert
> Review result: Not Ready
> 
[...]

> Nits
> ------
> 
> "
>     IP packets MUST be transmitted over 802.11-OCB media as QoS Data
>     frames whose format is specified in IEEE Std 802.11.
> "
> Please add link to the reference

I added like below.

But beware that:
- it is the third time we refer to this document in the text.
- the document behind the URL is behind a paywall, even though the
   description of the document is free of access.


NEW:
>    IP packets MUST be transmitted over 802.11-OCB media as QoS Data
>    frames whose format is specified in IEEE 802.11(TM) -2016
>    [IEEE-802.11-2016].
[...]
>    [IEEE-802.11-2016]
>               "IEEE Standard 802.11-2016 - IEEE Standard for Information
>               Technology - Telecommunications and information exchange
>               between systems Local and metropolitan area networks -
>               Specific requirements - Part 11: Wireless LAN Medium
>               Access Control (MAC) and Physical Layer (PHY)
>               Specifications. Status - Active Standard.  Description
>               retrieved freely on September 12th, 2017, at URL
>               https://standards.ieee.org/findstds/
>               standard/802.11-2016.html".

Alex