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Thu, 18 Apr 2024 02:10:16 -0400 (EDT) X-Mailer: MessagingEngine.com Webmail Interface User-Agent: Cyrus-JMAP/3.11.0-alpha0-386-g4cb8e397f9-fm-20240415.001-g4cb8e397 MIME-Version: 1.0 Message-Id: In-Reply-To: <161277b5-0e50-44f8-9c52-f583b928456d@dogfoodapp.fastmail.com> References: <171337551775.17968.503570333791003376@ietfa.amsl.com> <161277b5-0e50-44f8-9c52-f583b928456d@dogfoodapp.fastmail.com> Date: Thu, 18 Apr 2024 16:09:56 +1000 From: "Neil Jenkins" To: "Paul Wouters" , iesg Cc: draft-ietf-jmap-sharing@ietf.org, jmap-chairs@ietf.org, "IETF JMAP Mailing List" , "Bron Gondwana" , arnt.gulbrandsen@icann.org Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary=f0b18417b14c444abf59814dd9f4ed1f Archived-At: Subject: Re: [Jmap] Paul Wouters' No Objection on draft-ietf-jmap-sharing-08: (with COMMENT) X-BeenThere: jmap@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.39 Precedence: list List-Id: JSON Message Access Protocol List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 18 Apr 2024 06:10:26 -0000 --f0b18417b14c444abf59814dd9f4ed1f Content-Type: text/plain On Thu, 18 Apr 2024, at 16:00, Neil Jenkins wrote: > Numerous sections use the bullet points and empty lines in way that >> "mis-group" the items for me, making it difficult to parse. I almost raised >> this as a DISCUSS. An example: > > I'm not seeing these empty lines in the HTML, text, or PDF versions. Can you please clarify where you are seeing this and I'll discuss with the RFC editors to make sure it's formatted correctly. Aha, I have found this issue in the htmlized version; the only one I forgot to check! I'll bring it up with the RFC editors. Cheers, Neil. --f0b18417b14c444abf59814dd9f4ed1f Content-Type: text/html
On Thu, 18 Apr 2024, at 16:00, Neil Jenkins wrote:
Numerous sections use the bullet points and empty lines in way that 
"mis-group" the items for me, making it difficult to parse. I almost raised
this as a DISCUSS. An example:

I'm not seeing these empty lines in the HTML, text, or PDF versions. Can you please clarify where you are seeing this and I'll discuss with the RFC editors to make sure it's formatted correctly.

Aha, I have found this issue in the htmlized version; the only one I forgot to check! I'll bring it up with the RFC editors.

Cheers,
Neil.
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