[Jmap] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-jmap-mdn-15: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [Jmap] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-jmap-mdn-15: (with COMMENT)
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Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-jmap-mdn-15: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-jmap-mdn/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- There are several places in the document where "header" should be changed to "header field". In Section 2.1, I think this could be a bit clearer: OLD: The following already registered SetError would mean: NEW: In this context, the existing SetError values defined in [reference] are interpreted as follows: In Sections 2.1 and 2.2: This is totally a personal nit, and you're free to ignore me, but since I keep tripping on it I'll mention it: In various places, "id" is used as a word rather than an initialism, as in "The id of the account to use." I keep reading this as the English term from psychoanalysis rather than a truncation of "identifier". I'd probably be happier if the full word was used. Also, in the first bullet of Section 2, it's capitalized as "Id"; we should probably be consistent. In Section 3: a) s/guaranty/guarantee/ (multiple instances) b) There's an extension in Section 3.1 starting with "X-" that should probably be revisited given BCP 178.
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