Re: [Jmap] Last Call for draft-ietf-jmap-smime-03

Neil Jenkins <neilj@fastmailteam.com> Tue, 23 March 2021 03:44 UTC

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Date: Tue, 23 Mar 2021 14:44:29 +1100
From: "Neil Jenkins" <neilj@fastmailteam.com>
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Subject: Re: [Jmap] Last Call for draft-ietf-jmap-smime-03
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I've read through this version and it seems fine. There are a few typos/grammar nits but I'm sure the RFC editors will pick those up. It might be worth adding a paragraph in the *Conventions* section like we did in 8621 <https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc8621#section-1.1> to note that the type signatures syntax is from 8620.

Cheers,
Neil.