[jose] Éric Vyncke's Yes on charter-ietf-jose-02-01: (with COMMENT)

[Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
charter-ietf-jose-02-01: Yes

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COMMENT:
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It seems that the use of MD URL makes the text difficult to read (probably a
datatracker rendering issue).

The 4th paragraph starting with "A multi-decade research activity..." is a
little long (suggest to skip the first sentence). Having two sentences starting
with "Some" makes this paragraph rather vague. Finally, once ZKP abbreviation
is introduced, then let's use it.

s/This group is chartered to work on the following deliverables/This group is
chartered to work on the following goals/ as later in the charter "One or more
of these goals may be combined into a single document" (which would make sense).

About the CBOR encoding, should CDDL be mentioned ? Should CBOR WG be listed in
the interested parties ?