Re: [jose] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7515 (4554)

Kathleen Moriarty <kathleen.moriarty.ietf@gmail.com> Tue, 08 December 2015 13:59 UTC

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Subject: Re: [jose] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7515 (4554)
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Thanks for your advice on this.

How about I mark it as 'editorial' and hold for document update, then add a note that says the normative section is correct and this is just an HTML markup from txt issue?

Thanks,
Kathleen 

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> On Dec 8, 2015, at 8:47 AM, John Bradley <ve7jtb@ve7jtb.com> wrote:
> 
> I agree, Rfcmarkup strikes again:) 
> 
> The canonical version is txt and that is correct.
> 
> The link is probably correct in the XML version.  
> One day we will publish RFC from the XML and can get rid of these stupid HTML markup from TXT issues.
> 
> Worth keeping a note of if we do do an errata and can publish in XML.
> 
> Until that time nothing to do for it.
> 
> John B.
> 
>> On Dec 8, 2015, at 1:21 AM, Jim Schaad <ietf@augustcellars.com> wrote:
>> 
>> 
>> My inclination is to say that this is not a valid Errata.  The complaint is
>> really against the tools and not the document as the complaint is dealing
>> with the line, which is not part of the RFC, rather than with either
>> technical or editorial content of the document.
>> 
>> I believe that the original text is sufficiently clear as to which section
>> is being referred to for a human.  But it would not be clear to a tool.  The
>> suggested change may or may not fix that for the tool and a better approach
>> is probably to start using the xml source for the generation of the html
>> page rather than to fix up the text version.
>> 
>> Jim
>> 
>> 
>>> -----Original Message-----
>>> From: RFC Errata System [mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org]
>>> Sent: Friday, December 04, 2015 7:17 AM
>>> To: mbj@microsoft.com; ve7jtb@ve7jtb.com; n-sakimura@nri.co.jp;
>>> stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie; Kathleen.Moriarty.ietf@gmail.com;
>>> odonoghue@isoc.org; ietf@augustcellars.com
>>> Cc: simon@bastli.ethz.ch; jose@ietf.org; rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org
>>> Subject: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7515 (4554)
>>> 
>>> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7515, "JSON Web
>>> Signature (JWS)".
>>> 
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> You may review the report below and at:
>>> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=7515&eid=4554
>>> 
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> Type: Editorial
>>> Reported by: Simon <simon@bastli.ethz.ch>
>>> 
>>> Section: 2
>>> 
>>> Original Text
>>> -------------
>>>  Base64url Encoding
>>>     Base64 encoding using the URL- and filename-safe character set
>>>     defined in Section 5 of RFC 4648 [RFC4648], with all trailing
>> \\'=\\'
>>>     characters omitted (as permitted by Section 3.2) and without the
>>>     inclusion of any line breaks, whitespace, or other additional
>>>     characters.  Note that the base64url encoding of the empty octet
>>>     sequence is the empty string.  (See Appendix C for notes on
>>>     implementing base64url encoding without padding.)
>>> 
>>> Corrected Text
>>> --------------
>>>  Base64url Encoding
>>>     Base64 encoding using the URL- and filename-safe character set
>>>     defined in Section 5 of RFC 4648 [RFC4648], with all trailing
>> \\'=\\'
>>>     characters omitted (as permitted by Section 3.2 of RFC 4648) and
>>>     without the inclusion of any line breaks, whitespace, or other
>>>     additional characters.  Note that the base64url encoding of the
>>>     empty octet sequence is the empty string.  (See Appendix C for
>>>     notes on implementing base64url encoding without padding.)
>>> 
>>> Notes
>>> -----
>>> in the html version https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7515 the link on
>> \\"Section
>>> 3.2\\" goes to Section 3.2 of RFC7515 but it should go to Section 3.2 of
>>> RFC4648. Not sure how the automatic link generation is made (or is it
>> manual?),
>>> so i would propose explicitly saying \\"Section 3.2 of RFC 4648\\".
>>> 
>>> Instructions:
>>> -------------
>>> This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please use
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>> edit the
>>> report, if necessary.
>>> 
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> RFC7515 (draft-ietf-jose-json-web-signature-41)
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> Title               : JSON Web Signature (JWS)
>>> Publication Date    : May 2015
>>> Author(s)           : M. Jones, J. Bradley, N. Sakimura
>>> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
>>> Source              : Javascript Object Signing and Encryption
>>> Area                : Security
>>> Stream              : IETF
>>> Verifying Party     : IESG
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