Re: [jose] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7515 (4554)

"Jim Schaad" <ietf@augustcellars.com> Tue, 08 December 2015 04:24 UTC

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From: Jim Schaad <ietf@augustcellars.com>
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My inclination is to say that this is not a valid Errata.  The complaint is
really against the tools and not the document as the complaint is dealing
with the line, which is not part of the RFC, rather than with either
technical or editorial content of the document.

I believe that the original text is sufficiently clear as to which section
is being referred to for a human.  But it would not be clear to a tool.  The
suggested change may or may not fix that for the tool and a better approach
is probably to start using the xml source for the generation of the html
page rather than to fix up the text version.

Jim


> -----Original Message-----
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> Cc: simon@bastli.ethz.ch; jose@ietf.org; rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org
> Subject: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7515 (4554)
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7515, "JSON Web
> Signature (JWS)".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=7515&eid=4554
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Simon <simon@bastli.ethz.ch>
> 
> Section: 2
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
>    Base64url Encoding
>       Base64 encoding using the URL- and filename-safe character set
>       defined in Section 5 of RFC 4648 [RFC4648], with all trailing
\\'=\\'
>       characters omitted (as permitted by Section 3.2) and without the
>       inclusion of any line breaks, whitespace, or other additional
>       characters.  Note that the base64url encoding of the empty octet
>       sequence is the empty string.  (See Appendix C for notes on
>       implementing base64url encoding without padding.)
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>    Base64url Encoding
>       Base64 encoding using the URL- and filename-safe character set
>       defined in Section 5 of RFC 4648 [RFC4648], with all trailing
\\'=\\'
>       characters omitted (as permitted by Section 3.2 of RFC 4648) and
>       without the inclusion of any line breaks, whitespace, or other
>       additional characters.  Note that the base64url encoding of the
>       empty octet sequence is the empty string.  (See Appendix C for
>       notes on implementing base64url encoding without padding.)
> 
> Notes
> -----
> in the html version https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7515 the link on
\\"Section
> 3.2\\" goes to Section 3.2 of RFC7515 but it should go to Section 3.2 of
> RFC4648. Not sure how the automatic link generation is made (or is it
manual?),
> so i would propose explicitly saying \\"Section 3.2 of RFC 4648\\".
> 
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> --------------------------------------
> RFC7515 (draft-ietf-jose-json-web-signature-41)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : JSON Web Signature (JWS)
> Publication Date    : May 2015
> Author(s)           : M. Jones, J. Bradley, N. Sakimura
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Javascript Object Signing and Encryption
> Area                : Security
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG